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| Blueraingurl 2007-09-19 ch 1,  | abuse"...betrayed it’s typical blue for a pure white nothingness" Just from reading the first few sentences and already, I feel that you have a beautiful way in describing things. It's detailed and I'm able to imagine it in my mind. "an extremely short skirt that couldn’t possibly be proper..." LMAO, hehe *loves* "He was careful to avoid saying ‘you want me…to stay with you?’ because he didn’t feel comfortable thinking of it that way" yay! I love your characterization of Inuyasha and I think you hit it spot on with your description here xD AND OMG, 2002?! You haven't updated your fic since 2002 *angsts* You have an interesting premise here and maybe you'll be motivated to update your fics! Anyways, I will be reading your other fics, albeit slowly, but hopefully soon xD *ohohoh* *twated* |
| bria 2007-07-19 ch 1, anon. | abusei love your story plas update |
| Reiyuka 2005-12-19 ch 1, | abuse*chuckles* Inuyasha sure is sweet when he completely forgets about being a bad-** hanyou. ^-^ Quite a nice story, very entertaining and a great beginning - although the interaction between Inuyasha and Kagome is more 'touchy' then I'd have imagined, I suppose that Inuyasha's normal reserves aren't there to stop him. I hope you continue soon. |
| Me 2005-12-09 ch 1, anon. | abuseNot a bad storyline. I like it and once again the writing quality is very good. Update if you can, as soon as you can. PLEASE! |
| JadeElemental 2005-01-02 ch 1, | abuseUPDATE UPDATE UPDATE! ok normally i save that for the end of my review, but i absolutely love ur story... its so beautiful and the plot is so interesting and i think Inu adn Kag are involved, which is GREAT! because everyone knows that they completely belong together and thats how it works so update update update upate |
| Zenze 2004-12-14 ch 1, | abuseHmm...looks like it's off to an interesting start. I'm looking forward to the next chapter. ^^ |
| conathena213 2004-10-27 ch 1, | abuseawesome!! i like the plot; it seems to actually be going somewhere. i only wish you'd write some more. i'm all curious now! |
| Karla Manatee 2004-10-15 ch 1, | abuseStrange, yes... Other than that, it was well written and it's a very good concept. I'd like to read more. |
| gossa 2004-08-29 ch 1, | abusear,i´m really interested in what happens next.I hope you continue this storie.I have liked this firste chapter very much :D |
| Goddess-Of-Anime 2004-08-28 ch 1, | abuseDon't stop there! You just hafta continue! I'd like to see how they get over this. And where are Sango, Miroku, and Shippou? Good luck. |
| Kikyo-Kagome-Sakura 2004-05-31 ch 1, anon. | abuseI also liked this story. I am a new reader of your stories. I like the 2 stories I have read. The one about Falling into your dreams and this one too. I think you should definitely continue this fic. I suggest that you have them remember small bits of memmories like you did in this one. Grate work. From the Wiccan Priestess |
| Golden-Fire-Goddess 2004-05-18 ch 1, | abuseI really like this one too, I hope you add more to the fic soon. ;) |
| burningangel19 2004-05-17 ch 1, anon. | abuseExcellent, alot of emotion. absolutly choose this one! |
| YamiHoshi 2004-05-14 ch 1, | abuseThat was a wonderful chappie please post more soon. |
| Kayomie 2004-05-04 ch 1, | abuseI like it!! You should definately update this one more!! |