The quote in the last line is simply genius, adding a more sophisticated slant onto an otherwise wonderful piece.

You write Jess so perfectly it feels as though, as a reader, i am in his head instead of my own.

"Impressively PG orientation" is perhaps the best original phrase from this entire piece. I love your originality and slight twist on otherwise over worked scenarios.

I adore the fact you used a Robert Frost poem as the last line. I honestly was expecting something less intriguing... Not that I didn't like it. In fact I loved it more than I thought. But reading the summary I was afraid Jess would be to out of character...

But I absolutely love this story and that's all that matters... (:

Lovely story, great descriptions. Love the idea that Rory is the addiction that takes the place of running.

Good Story