|Reviews for My Immortal|
| CuteDemonButterfly 9/25/12 . chapter 3
Just give up.
| CuteDemonButterfly 9/25/12 . chapter 2
This is one of the worst FanFiction I have ever read. First of all, your main character is a Mary-Sue. She is named after her black hair? Seriously! It's like calling someone Poo because their hair is the colour of poo! Also I think you may have done a bit of a self-insertion because You put in streaks and dyed hair tips for your characters. Totally unnecessary for the plot! Your description is crap and I see no proper plot. You need to sit down and rewrite the whole story my friend. Get someone else to read it first.
My dog (which does not exist) could have pooped out a better story!
The only reason why it's not the worst fanfic I've ever read is because your grammar and punctuation is good.
| Dorian Windslasher 9/25/12 . chapter 3
I feel both violated and amused at the same time. Still can't decide whether the author tries to troll or just sucks.
| pls 9/24/12 . chapter 11
| My god 9/24/12 . chapter 11
What in the mind fuck did I just read!
| Guest 9/24/12 . chapter 8
best thing ever.
| Ivy 9/23/12 . chapter 8
Uhm. I stopped reading around ""Yah, so u can fuk ur six-yr-old gurlfriend, huh?" I shouted sarkastikally"
| The Otaku Squirrel 9/23/12 . chapter 6
"And Loopin was masticating to it!"
Does this girl even know how terrible her grammar and spelling is? Masticating? Masticating; seriously?
Masticating: "is the process by which food is crushed and ground by teeth."
I hope this girl meant masturbating and not masticating...And, even then, I'm wishing that it wasn't masturbating...Tara really didn't pass the fourth grade...
| GamerGirlFromHell 9/22/12 . chapter 8
I think I want to slit my wrist after reading just this much. ._. Mein Gott she makes me ashamed to like the color black...*sigh*
| Umbreon at Dusk 9/22/12 . chapter 9
V That guy knows how to live
| Dreamcatcher511 9/22/12 . chapter 6
Honestly...I don't like the story. I like the idea for it (kinda) but I got confused at so many parts that it didn't seem like a story anymore. Please use auto-correct because honestly, my 8 year old sister could write a better story.
| Liemy Jose 9/22/12 . chapter 6
This story gave me cancer.
| MitchieDBBC 9/22/12 . chapter 5
I don't normally review stories, but when i do it's probably one of two reasons, it sucks or i love it. I swear, this story makes me want to die and only with the power of Cry and Snakes voice can this story be so fucking bad, that it's good. May god forgive me for reading this crap.
| Guest 9/22/12 . chapter 5
You are a complete retard. You read all the books, you say? Skipping to the last chapter doesn't count. Pathetic. The only reason this is entertaining, is because I'm watching Cry read it live. Dipshit.
| Guest 9/22/12 . chapter 5
I'm here because Cry is reading this on stream right now, and it's the funniest **** ever