Seriously funny- can't wait to read your other stuff!

sorry but it just don't work out.

Ah, leave it to "Fluffy" Thea Zara to make a raving psycho out of Monique. Good story, but I don't really think that Monique is that obsessed with Trent. I see Monique as having a "Quinn-esque" view toward guys. To paraphrase the poem, "You know Quinn's a winner. She couldn't be thinner. Cause she doesn't eat food. She goes out with guys and eats them for dinner." Or something like that. That's how I see Monique, but it was a really GOOD story nonetheless. 4 Stars. Very entertaining. Keep up the good work, Thea!

Wolfie here- mad, i loved the end.. it is mad.. wish we could get Trents reaction though...

*foflmao* now that is amusing.

I love it, its hilarious.

She tried to sell them? Hmm, I think somebody frgot to mention to her that the slave trade is over!

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