Wow, that was a little hard to follow. Partly because it was AU and there was nothing offered as a lead in and partly because it's got some editing issues (words missing, wrong words, poor flow of thought, etc.) Though I did enjoy it and very much liked the plot and purpose of the story. I mostly (except for editing errors) like how you write and how you think - but I would like to see more flow to your thoughts. Make them easier for the rest of us to follow please and thank you.

Cheers Jen

A well-written fic. You nailed the characters perfectly; I felt like I was watching an episode of the show in my head. Great job!

Very very nice.

Wow! I'm impressed at ur writing style I love it reallyDDD it's amazing. And alongside with the story idea, the stomach tuning angst and the amazing capturing of emotions... Wow

I also love how u explained SAMs brain with the cataloging and so on really creative and fitting!

Plus legacy is amongst my face episodes so if it it's turned to involve my favorite genius and my favorite couple, all the better DDD

Thanx

A different take on Legacy and I enjoyed it. I know he made her feel better and in time she will heal.

:-)

I enjoyed this, a good bit of mission based angst! Great relationship writing.

Wonderful moody piece.