this is gonna be a great fic!

oi.

UPDATE. THIS. NOW.

I want more :3

Ah, the joys of friction between siblings, aside from the usual. Though there are always problems with growing up in any family.

The hunting trip clearly did not go as planned, kind of makes me wonder what's going to happen next.

Just one thing, father doesn't have an r after the a. Other than that, all's good!

I'm loving this chapter, for a lot of reasons. Here we get an insight into their character, at their worst and best, and a look at how the family is. Not to mention those 'bullies' that are brought up in the movie.

Great update!

The reaction? Sublime. I'm honestly waiting to see how you write the interaction between the two themselves, not to mention their other siblings. I could see at least one of them being able to rib the two into an argument.

Looking to hear more from you!

You have no idea how long I've waited for someone to do this. This seems to be going on pretty good so far, and honestly, the whole thing with the cousins being together is perfect. Definitely does suit what's in the movie.

Keep going!