Awesome, I've never watched the show, but your fanfic is well written, the characters personalities are easily picked up and understood and the situations and story were described very well.

This whole story was SO good. I loved the dialogue between the two. It's funny how you made Tokiya such a bad-ass but the dialogue was consistent throughout the chapters and really made these edgy, snarky aspects of their characters believable. Great job!

OMG, this was AWESOME! I love you! This fic was just perfect! It had the right amount of humor, the cute perfect plot and a whole load of sexual tensions and one giant chapter of lemons! Kyaaa! I certainly enjoyed every word of this! Your ToFuu is one of the BEST so far that I've read!

And your lemons...OMG,OMG! People should learn from you! I actually prefer the more gritty type of lemons over the poetic type any day! You go girl! :D

Oh you write the best ToFuu fic ever! There is not enough ToFuu fics around I am glad you are writing quite a few. I enjoy them a lot. Keep it up :) Of course the M-rated ones are the best :P

This was like... The HOTTEST lemon I have ever read. Oh gosh, plus it wasn't as OOC as you claimed, so rest assured XD I found the characterizations really endearing and so close to canon It made the story more enjoyable to read. Thank you for sharing! :)

I almost died laughing on the "glow in the dark" book. ROTFLMAO!

I was looking for some light reading on a lazy Sunday evening and I stumbled upon this.

Well, despite it being very Mary Sue-ish, this wasn't bad at all, although Domon is still quite an idiot.

The other reviewers have said what I wanted to say: THIS IS SO HOT! I look forward to your future works! :D

"The book was glow in the dark"

xD! I couldn't stop laughing and squealing! I really love this fic!

you, mia fitzpatrick, are a bad ass writer..! i was getting frustrated with domon in chapter 2, heck! i WANTED to shoot him with a shot gun! hahaha..

i like this determined, layered version of tokiya. i like that he is capable of emotions other than being indifferent and stoic. it gives him character, at the same time, it really makes the reader believe that the characters are really different people.

so in a nut shell, coz i don't know if you noticed that i have a tendency to rant, great update, awesome characterization, good story thus far...! definitely one of my top 10 faves. :)

i wonder how domon will pay them back? hahahha

Whooooooooo! x'D

Finally! Hahaha!

Too bad, Domon, better luck next time...only not with Fuuko．Unfortunately. p

Whoo, the pr0n is detailed as always...I couldn't help imagine it in my head. That's so HOT. * 0*b

that was holy f*cking awesome miss mia! haha! nothing but the best fics from you! finally! they were able to do it. i'm so happy for them (after everything they'd gone through. tch. tch.). the last part had me laughing so hard. two thumbs up mia! i'll look forward to you future lemon-flavored fics.

WOW! a public declaration! lol, I love you too you porny slutty perv! hahaha!

great great ending! i love the devilish domon hahaha...

first that tokiya's in Fuuko's mother's bad books XD

love the smut, the position and foreplay was risque and way waaay hot! gotta love the sweet twist too!

and you my dear should go see a confessor after this! egad! hahahahahahahah! yay ESILY! XD

That was awesome! Sweet and hot!