Love this! Writing for Alice and Uncas is always pretty difficult but you did a great job! Hope you write more!

so cute! this was really good detail on the thoughts inside Alice's head during this scene/clip.

awwww loved reading this. alice was always my favorite character!

This story gives not only peace to Alice but also to me, because it is so beautiful and touching.

It describes a moment of peace and comfort for both of them. I like it.

You are quite the master at the short and beautifully moving piece. That was wonderful.

Beautiful. I love. :)

Oh Alice, in all her tragic naivety. I especially like the perspective that maybe Alice is beginning to be jealous of Cora. And my favorite line: "I wonder when I began to depend on his presence for safety." Uncas and Alice are just too heartbreaking.