OMGAWD! T_T lol~ so good :o I love it! Aoki x Karen are one of my favourite couples but part of what I always liked about them was his family-ness and her morality which wouldn't let them do anything! So frustrating, but you managed to capture that attraction without making compromising their characters~ Kudos ^_^
*~Arwen

that was really lovely. they're such a sweet couple. =)

*__* . . . wow, that was beautifully written. I espcially enjoyed your Aoki POV. I too am a Aoki and Karen fan, and I believe you did this *if only* couple justice. I do hope you plan to write more on them.
I also wanted to say you are a very talented writer ^_^

Ooooo... very nice. This is a very good fanfic. I think you captured Aoki's thoughs well, you're very good at writing for him. It was a nice little scenario you wrote. Very good job, hopefully I will see more of this quality writing from you.

Nicely written =)