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Reviews for: 30 Pieces of Silver
FifthDayOfMay 2/12/12 . chapter 1
Aw, I somehow like this pairing. I never really thought about to when I was watching the series though.
Akuro13 6/29/11 . chapter 1
very, very nice. It was definitely a fun and entertaining read!

favoriteing tiiiiime.
LycheeTea 3/27/11 . chapter 1
you've definitely kept wolfwood in character, even though he's doing things that i would label as "oc". i really like the interaction between him and vash, it feels incredibly authentic.
Shaitanah 3/25/11 . chapter 1
LOL, why do you even need reviewers? You're doing quite well on your own. (Yes, I've just checked the reviews page and seen your weirdness there.)

As always with unfamiliar fandoms, I can't really judge, but I do like the mood of this piece. Especially the closing lines. They tell much about the characters even if I'm not very familiar with their background.
September's Nobara 3/23/11 . chapter 1
I really like the fact that this is written in present tense. It's very "in the moment" and relaxing, at least in my opinion, ha ha. Their interaction was well done, and the scene where they're getting intimate (not sure if this is the "proper" word to use, here) definitely captured the sensuality of the moments. Ah! And, seriously, Vash's characterization and mannerisms are absolutely adorable throughout the entire read. Wolfwood's reactions were icing on the doughnut, of course! It was easy to understand Wolfwood's thought processes at the end of the story, and I could relate to both the good and the "sell out" concepts. My only concrit would have to be to encourage you to keep writing! Really, you've done very well, here. Definitely enjoyable. Great work!

Sincerely,

September's Nobara.
alorsilyauntableici 3/23/11 . chapter 1
of course it's a fanfiction. what did you think it was?

a piece of abstract literature?
nohabloelespanol 3/23/11 . chapter 1
i believe, this is a FANFICTION.
yes i'm so original XD 3/22/11 . chapter 1
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Zero doesn’t dream often, but when he dreams it’s always of them.

Her, in her white dress and her warm smile lighting up her features (he’s never forgotten how beautiful she was, nor how her eyes lit up when she smiled).

In his dreams, he holds her like he never did when she was still alive (him too afraid, too scared to soil her purity with his tainted hands). But, he’s older and wiser now, so he holds Euphy and isn’t ashamed or afraid of doing so.

But he also dreams of him. Him, in his Emperor’s robe, also white and with that weird eye symbol (he always asked Lelouch, and – though Lelouch gave him a lengthy answer each time – he still never seemed to understand what the eye symbolised). In his dreams, Lelouch’s smiling – not that Zero smile of his, nor the wicked smile of the Emperor, but just that warm smile that Lelouch perfected (always a bit subdued, careful, and yet, warm). He’s lying on Lelouch’s lap now, closing his eyes and just being happy there. Because, in life, he could never seem to trust Lelouch enough, and, when he finally did, it was nearly too late.

Yes, he’s happy like this – his head resting on Lelouch’s lap (his emperor) and holding on to Euphie (his princess).

He’s happy being their knight.
Hedonistic Opportunist 3/22/11 . chapter 1
Because having this piece stick out like an ugly weed in a blossom of glimmering, ruby red and shining roses is just ugly, it breaks my heart like Light faps to his Death Note, it's like Suzaku and Lelouch having sex (and yes, Lelouch loves it when Suzaku goes down on him) with Nunnally right there –

And C.C eating pizza, commenting all the time how boring all of it is.

(Really, a 6 am production. And I hate it when there’s just nothing feedback-wise, so I humour myself by writing my own review, lol).
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