Hi!

Kind of funny that incantation is in Latvian language. :)

Oh wow. Oh WOW. You updated!

I love the scene and the talk between Merlin and Gwaine. Makes me crave for more GwaineMerlin stories (or write one, but I'm too lazy XP)

And on top of that, there's the creepy Goblin King. Dude, srsly. I never expected that one!

Oh Merlin, I really don't wanna be you, having to choose who to love.

Since when did I become the muscle?

But at least you updated. Can't it be longer though? You're torturing us, dude!

Bah, I reviewed! Those guys will be there, right?

Three words. Please, please UPDATE! And yeah, I'm yelling at you. You did said you need someone to yell at you to remind you to update. )

AI

Yay Arthur can't do anything about this situation. I love seeing Arthur get put down a bit. I was wondering at first how you were going to add in Jacob. That was a good plan. Can't wait to see what happens next. Hope to see an update soon.

- Dark N.

This is my genuine review (since apparently the one I posted yesterday didn't save...really, I'm not THAT crazy)

I thought the characters were well portrayed and the plot is pretty interesting. As for pairings, I love the Arthur/Merlin pairing, but with this story, it doesn't seem like it would fit, So, Jacob/Merlin?

Very interesting plot and the writing was very well done. I'm always sad when Merlin ends up with someone else, but am willing to give it up for a new plot or interesting character development. As long as it is not done with excessive meanness toward Gwen or Arthur. That type of meanness just ruins the romance. I find the hint at a past with Jacob is very interesting. Also, the idea that if Arthur kills him, then he has to take his place is interesting. Arthur might make a pretty wolf, kind of light colored and golden.

Nice start, but there were some major typo's. Otherwise it's pretty awesome. The concept is really cool and I like the funny feel to it. You should probably keep authors notes/thoughts/interjections in parenthesis though (I know that seems silly, but seriously it helps) because it can be confusing otherwise. Like the part about Merlin asking for something, it was weird that the sentence just randomly turned into your thoughts. And no one can actually 'sweat drop' in a sentence, it's not good writing. A sweat drop is a graphic, not a textual phrase. Anyway, good start, and please write more :)

I just read the story and I am already hook. I cannot wait till the next update and loved how frustrated Arthur is for not having the answers that he wants.

I haven't thought of this sort of crossover but it seems very interesting. think you should go with it. As for the pairings I'm not sure who Merlin should end up with. Personally I'm a Merthur fan but I'm open to any pairing.