wow this was so good!

and really sad :(

It made sense though, and a lot of your claims are entirely to relatable to me.

awesome job!

surprisely good!

Hey,

You have a nice view on Remus' and Sirius' frienship :D I have never read a story like this before, well at least not from this point of view :D It was very well written and I could comprehend every single argument, therefore it didn't matter if I agreed with every single bit. Guess that proves the quality of your story :P

Well done!

keep up the great work thank you

wow- def an original take on the friendship of Sirius and Remus. Very heartbreaking! I hope that's not how they really feel about each other! The four boys' friendship is something I've always loved. Your writing was excellent!

That was brave, breaking out of the Remus/Sirius ideal - so good on you, I suppose. Reading that actually hurt a little. I hate to think of them feeling that way about each other. Even when I read angsty, horrible, no-hope-for-a-happy-ending stories about Remus and Sirius there's always that comforting sense that deep down they'll always love each other, even when they're broken and defeated. But you took that comfort out of this. And I appreciate being shown their relationship in that light. It certainly breaks the monotony.

Your writing is really sharp so no crit or anything.