Good, although I must point out that we don't say 'ass' in England, and don't pronounce the 'r' in first. It's more like 'fuhst'.

looooved it

This is the cutest story ever! Even more than Kurt and Blaine from glee (okay maybe not)! I love gay stories, THANK YOU! You changed me!

Love it! Please, write another chapter! :) XD And the "Lentil tea" was SOOO GOOD! XD

This is a really great story, but you really need to watch your spelling and grammar. Apart from that, this story rocks!

Lentil tea and talking rat 3 XD

The mannerisms are spot on :P

Are they gonna get 'intimate' in the story? :P

Em

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OMG! I'm so happy you updated! That was adorable :')

aw, that's sweet. Though I had to re-read the first 2 chapters to get into the story again and at some places I missed some capital letters or similar, but all in all: good stuff, keep going like this! :)

This is sweet, I'm glad you updated!

Emma

Love it so far :) hope you update sooon

More! More! Moremoremoremoremore! It's so cute, I love it! Please don't give this story up, "it's so bloody nice!"

Awwwww is all i can say 3. I LOVE the young ones and seriously this story was the cutest D , you should seriously carry it on ] it was great (Y) keep up the good work D

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RizzoTheGeeskter

Lol! I love it!

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Lovely story _

"'Hey! It's that kid Vyv likes!'" - sweet! Looking forward to more :P