 DPFYLUVR 2006-07-11 . chapter 2thats really good
at first i was mad cuz ya made tasuki the 'bad guy' but now im ok with it you should totally continue
*gives puppy dog eyes* Pretty Please? |
 Wingstar23 2003-08-18 . chapter 2great foolow up to ch1.little angst little fluff and right at the end-the cold dagger of shock hits. you gotta put up more! this story's so amazingly good. it pulled me in from the first scentence and i'm still glued to the screen even though the chapter's over. keep it up.
~Tenshi Kitsune~ |
 Wingstar23 2003-08-18 . chapter 1amazing. it's not the right word to describe this story and it barely comes close to saying what i think of this but it's all i *can* say. this first chapter was both sad and scary at the same time. i felt so bad for both nuriko and tasuki...and chichiri too. Nuri-chan's right, chiri does pretend not to need the others but in the end he needs them just as much-or maybe more than- anyone else doesn't he? that description made my heart clench, i never looked at it from that perspective. excellent descriptions and beautiful character developments. gonna go read ch2, but write more soon! i'm already in love with this fic!
~Tenshi Kitsune~ |
 leila 2003-06-24 . chapter 2 what will happen?please update chapter 3...i beg you!! |
 Deity 2003-04-06 . chapter 2*scoffs* Typical. You get a great story and it ain't updated in a year. Well, I'll make up the rest of it in my head:
The two make up, they snog, they are happy.
Better then what you're going to have, which is nothing, 'cause you'll probaly never ever update again. That makes me made. All the best stories are never continued. SEE YA
-Deity |
 leila 2003-03-30 . chapter 2 and then..??what will happen?moremoremore..pleasee!!(poor chichiri!!) |
 leila 2003-03-30 . chapter 2 and then..??what will happen?moremoremore..pleasee!!(poor chichiri!!) |
 Kourin 2003-01-04 . chapter 2 oooohhhh....good story 0.0 What next? |
 shareefa 2002-11-26 . chapter 2 YO! I've been staring at this ficcy for weeks now and u still haven't wrote! T-T poor Tasuki-chan he really is hurt Iwonder whats gonna hapen to him?? plzzz write i need to know soon! thxxxx |
 NephilimTear 2002-11-06 . chapter 2You have *got* to try and finish this. I really want to see how Chichiri's doing and where the hell Tasuki is and stuff like that. First of all you haven't updated this in a while, second of all you left it at a dead end, daa! You're not nice! It is a really great sequel, stemmed from one of the most tear-jerking fic I have ever read and you have practically abandoned it! *pouts* You're a meanie Ryuen-san, and I'm telling my mommy! ;P |
 NephilimTear 2002-11-06 . chapter 1Oh my god it's a sequel!!! I love you so much man!! Although it kind of takes away from MN's mysteriousness and crap like that I'm still very happy none the less. I'll tell you all my opinions in the next chapter, okay? |
 roku kyu 2002-08-26 . chapter 2Hmmmmmm, I've been meaning to get to this as it flashed by my eyes over a week ago - and finally I decided to track it down under your name. I'm brilliant, ne? Graduated from college, I did !!!
I'm goofing around here to try to get the shakiness out of my hands before I type. This chapter was very powerful and very angsty. I don't blame Tasuki for running away - very in character, and I probably would, too. This is a dark story, but compellingly realistic - and I'll keep coming back although (sigh) you're putting me through an emotional wringer with this one!
I also appreciated your description of court politics, and the grief that Nuriko and Hotohori must endure ever since Nuriko was found to be a man. Sigh. Realistic again, unfortunately.
Anyway, I'll be back! Great work, Ryuen! Ja ne! |
 Baka No Katsu 2002-08-25 . chapter 2ha haha! i've said it before i'll say it again, akugi's shouldn't go at the bottom of serious fics! i have my review all mapped out, then i end up falling of my chair laughing.
*tries to get back in the sorrow* okay, this was amazing! i so desperately wish i could be there to comfort tasuki..i just want to wrap my arms around him..*sniff* this story is great, since i really can't think of an easy soulution to this here problem. it's so sad, i just feel so sorry for him.
my friend is yelling at me for writing long reviews, saying that it's spamming and i'll be kicked out of fanfiction.net for it, so i guess i have to stoop here. so unbelievably short tho.
really really great amazing chapter, please, please write more of this story!
-Neko-chan |
 Moonraven 2002-08-18 . chapter 2Wahhh! I don't have to wait another 5 months for the next update, do I? Poor Tasuki-chan!
Please...hurry! |
 CLAMPraven 2002-08-17 . chapter 2(whistles in admiration) Wow. You certainly weren't kidding when you said you were going to update, were you? (GLOMPS) YOU'RE A GODDESS, RYUEN!!!! (accusing look) All the same, I thought you'd given up on this one! And damn, was I glad to find out that was not so. (nodnod) Yes. (GLOMPS again) Thank you for including our chipper rapping crossdresser in the akugis!!
Ja ne! (flies away) |