This is an amazing story! Very well done. Thank you so much for sharing!

your tital reminds me of a haiku

windows xp has crashed

this is the blue screen of death

no one can hear your screams

love your story

Thanks for this great story, it's been a pleasure reading it. And it has a happy ending...I live for happy endings :D They are even better after a good amount of whump and you had plenty of that!

Good luck with Mr Murphy during finals and I hope you'll be up to writing more great stories like this after that :D

I don't even know that I GOT chapter 5! I realized after reading chapter 6 and 7 that I was missing zomething and was going to go back and read it. I thought if was my fault though.

Yep, the FFN e-mail notification client is a bit messed up - I'm getting e-mails sometimes in triplicate all at once or I'll get another notification days *after* the fact.

I do think it's got issues... :-p

As for this, really interesting to see what's going on here with each new chapter. Here's to hoping that Neal's hearing loss resolves itself soon and he gets a chance to finally recover here before he ends up getting whumped on all over again. Too tired today to point out the nit-picking errors in previous chapters that need to be fixed, so just enjoy a glowing review from me. *lol*

Well, I don't know if it was FFnet's doing, but I got 3 updates all in the same day from your story, but than again, maybe youé just a scarrily fast writer...lol

Okay, I was going to say YAY at them being free from creepy Arogosis and his men, but now with Neal so sick, I'm not sure if it's already time to start celebrating...well for them I mean, I love to read more Neal-whump, whuahauhaha...UHm yeah never mind, I think I'll go find me a shrink to hold me until next chapter ;)

Excellent. I really am enjoying this. I love protective Mozzie, and guiding Neal across the street like a child. The accupuncture was a nice twist, I'm not that familiar with it. Nice and exciting. Very well written.

Great chapter!

I love this story, and I had actually figured out the meaning of the title! Keep going, looking forward to the next update!

This story has me at the edge of my seat. Pls update

No! Not needles! I'm so glad Peter and Neal are buddies again, hopefully Neal can get his hearing back soon. Although, it's pretty interesting to have him unable to heat. Very awesome so far

Great chapter! I love the little details you put in, and the dream sequences are interesting.

Interesting. I hope Neal is ok.

I'm really enjoying this story. Please continue soon!

Poor El, She's def going through Hell. Neal can't hear, and Peter has no memory... Damn! Great job hun! Update ASAP!