NICE! Please update! soon! I must know what happens to Jamie!

This is SO good. Hurry up and put up the next chapter, this is great! please e-mail me at as soon as you have done the next chapter! this is great!

Cool. I like. Pity it hasnt been updated in forever... COuld ya do it?

Maelgwyn... (Wants an update...)

Hey,

I love Jamie and Bit hurry with the

Next make it Fluff and like those! _ THanx and Keep up the great

Black Obsidian

interesting; pray, continue.

I thought this was sad.

I hope bit & Jaime hook up & make love.[Sorry if I sound like pervert]It's I can't find any good Bit/Jaime stories. Can you help me find more.I like your story.

Happy Writing!

Great job hope you write more...

This is a really good, angsty story. Poor, poor Jamie. Umm, if I may make a suggestion, it might be a good idea to find a beta reader, if you don't already have one. If you do have one, find...umm, what comes next...a gamma reader. This isn't to insult you or anything, but I just think that a little help would make your writing that much better. _

Nice story but you seem to be having some trouble making your sentences flow 'I don't what to do from so far', that sort of thing. Anyway, really great story I hope you continue.

T_T Meow...poor Jaime-chan.

and to tell you It's Fluegel not Frugel, not to be rude but it was just bugging me a bit. The story seems really good though.

Oh, wow. Very nice. I must say, you've written the whole depression and cutting thing very well. (I should know, I've been there, done that.) Well done! I can't wait for the next part. You really capture emotions well. Keep up the good work!