now i defenitively want to see an update.

do it whenever you feel it, i'll read it!( no need to add pressure ahahahaha) ;)

I was confused at first, but now I get it. Good story, though.

yes, very interesting, albeit somewhat fragmented because the piece doesn't have clear indication sometimes of how much time passes for the two

Very good.

BUT, I would consider revising the fic.

To elaborate more on this, the dialogue

is confusing because I do not know which

character actually speaks it.

BUT ALSO, Elaborate more on Yuki's

feelings and Mousse of course. Also

give more details of Yuki's past and

stuff, including other members of the

cast in the fic, and you will have a

good, long oneshot fic.

That is all.

** Kyaaa This is very good, Yui-san! I didn't know you wrote Ranma 1/2 fics! - Nice! _-

I love it too. Please keep making more stories like this.