that took my breath away!1

dude umm it was kind of weird and unexpected yeah thats all i have to say

Not so very good, but it's a nice idea.

*wipes a tear* beautiful...

ah, hey this is pretty good, ur pretty good with ryhmes, btw pleez RR my stuff too!

this poem was good, but it gave me a really uneasy feeling in my stomach. nothing against you or the story, it was great, but it was too damn depressing.

Oh my gosh! That was sooo sad! Yet I loved it! -sniffs-