|Reviews for The Fallen Ones|
| Necronosis 3/23/11 . chapter 1
Nice piece of humor. I particularly enjoyed the puns and references to the game. The nice variation of tone and a wide vocabulary make for a good read.
Although a few moments like the mention of "high level" giants (rather than just 'giants') or the mention of a sequel break the flow a little. Just trying to provide some constructive criticism. Keep it up :)