|Reviews for The End|
| chaotic-iak 4/13/12 . chapter 1
...meh can't make mines properly in text
Yay. Often gets the same thing :(
Should be longer, but otherwise fine. Ugh, I can't find anything majorly wrong to be mentioned, so I'll just say it is perfect if you make it longe- sorry, wait. *click click click BOOM* Ugh I guessed incorrectly again :( Okay, your fic is so simple that it's now stuck in my head :P
Keep writing! *click click click BOOM* Again?
| KameSagi 3/26/12 . chapter 1
Nice one:) It happened to me sooooooo many times. :) Although it was short, it was funny. :)
| mini-soda49 2/28/12 . chapter 1
Agh! You have to DO something with this! Build a plot, build some characters, use you imagination! C'mon!
| CheeseDeluxe 9/3/11 . chapter 1
Could be-no, should be longer. Other than that, I really can't say anything.
| Talrhean2103 6/19/11 . chapter 1
the plot depth was immense! *****
| AlphaZero15 6/1/11 . chapter 1
The suspense was... amazing. Word choice was fantastic. Over all amazing job, 10/10.