This is great are you planning to write more? If so I will be happy to read it :)

Nice beginning :-) ... are you planning on continuing this as a multi-chapter story? I'd love to find out more about Evan and his motives ... is he coming back for the "survivors" at the Clinic? Maybe for Lily?

I love your pairings, by the way :-) Although, I had a thing for Ryan as a character! :-)

Keep writing ... I want to learn more about your story! :-)

K.

LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE IT! AMAZING! U SHLD RITE MORE!