|Reviews for The First Move|
| BeeKay84 7/2/11 . chapter 1
Wow, that was amazing! I really like the idea behind this story, and the way you portrayed Guybrush and Elaine and their relationship. Especially the way you described Elaine's character. I always had a story about their breakup between SMI and MI2 in mind, but never got around to writing it down - and it's always fascinating to see how many different ways of telling this lost tale there seem to be. Your way was perfect in just about every way!
| Symbermine 3/31/11 . chapter 1
I missed you in this fandom. Its always interesting to read an interpretation about the events not explained by the cannon. I like the character development. I hope to read more of you in the future
| Anonymous MI fan 3/30/11 . chapter 1
Timeless, you've done it again! This was wonderfully well-written. I hope to see more in the near-future.