OH FUNNY!

I don't know what to think of that chapter. I like how it was written, but my feeling of hesitation comes from the fact that it might be another woman, not Eowyn you're writing about and that's holding me back from being excited about the continuation of this tale. *apologetic look*

Dear Thanwen: What an O. Henry ending! My reaction to this story was tepid until the last line, when I burst out laughing. This is a good story, very descriptively written, but the ending is by far the best part. Being a "Faramir-luster" myself, I can certainly sympathize with her frustration. Thanks for writing and posting this story. Sincerely, Darkover

Ill take the courtesy to be your first reviewer, and say youve written the frustration of one who has picked a wrong gender for the role-playing to the point :-)