nice work!

Great work

Really good

Wow again, really great story! I totally LOVED it!

Awwww I LOVED it :)

oh my gosh im so sad its over but i loved the ending and how the whole group was 2gether lol and i loved brookes article it was u write more soon!

Awesome way to end this story, about time they finally got together!

i really liked how you ended it. The interaction between all the friends was really fun to read. The nathan and haley confessed their feeling was really sweet. I did think we were going to get to see a little more naley alone time. I still loved the way you ended it.

update soon.

expected this story to be over.I'm sad.:( I really loved you going to write something new soon?

Brooke is working for a newspaper?Ewww...how lame,but still better than ,I'm complaining alot,but...I still think it is sad thing is that she got in,b/c someone put in a good word for didn't even get in all by herself._

Well...now the story is done (sadly) and it doesn't matter anymore!

I LOVED this story all in all!Really!:)

Hi there,

I just found this story and I have to say that I really love it.:) The story-plot is unique and you are able to give us some are many Naley-stories where it is all about those barely read something about the I can see that you are trying to include I don't like though,is what you are doing with she just Haleys friend here?What is she doing for her living?I read somewhere in previous chapters that she isn't really working?Why is that?I don't really like this ya know?Everyone is doing their job and she is doing nothing?Brooke has always been underestimated and this is all about party and her stupid into fashion,like she isn't good at anything expect looking good.I do like Brooke on the show and the success she has with her clothing line,but I always wished she would have done something totally doing something with fashion seemed so predictable to me.

And here?First I thought she was some kind of student,studying something that is taking you more than three years like law or medicine,but since "she has nothing else to do" it seems like she is doing nothing and I don't like that!All we know is that she is good at making .Exactly like on the boring.

I know this is a Naley one,but it is still kind of bothering me!:(

Great story nontheless!

Great chapter, I enjoyed reading it :)

You write Nathan really well

Im looking forward to read more, especially the aftermath of this case. I have a feeling Nathan will not want to let Haleyout of his sight.

Great job :)

yes yay im glad haley is safe and loved how they all were towards each other here it was good and really cant wait 4 naley 2 heat soon!

Amazing chapter, I love it. Im glad Haley is safe now and with Nathan again. I liked the interaction with all of them together and I cant wait to see what you have planned with the Nathan and Haley relationship. Please update soon again, cant wait for more.

Love it. Love it. Love it really want maker to be together. Live that haley calls Nathan boss all the time it's cute

that was a good chapter. I love what your doing with nathan and haley. Can't wait til there relationship heats up and loved the interaction with the others.

update soon