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| Pawz4thought 2008-07-21 ch 1, | abuseI have read most of your stories and they ROCK! |
| Mario Freak4 2008-06-09 ch 6, | abuseTo be honest, I only opened this story because it sounded absolutely ludicrous, but it is incredibly funny and well written. I have no clue what gave you the idea for a Malcom/HP crossover, but it was a great idea. I have a feeling I'll be reading the whole series. Now for the little nitpick: You had Ollivander call Ginny Virginia, her name is actually Ginevra. It was said a few times in the books. |
| mangafreakazoid 2008-04-23 ch 19, | abuseWonderful story. You wrote it very well.There were a few times where you mixed up a few words, but it was hardly noticable. Also, I reccomend that you put in line breaks between scenes. Sometimes I had trouble realizing the change. I can't wait to read the next one! |
| digi harpy 2007-08-01 ch 19, | abusePossibly another of my two favorite mixes, Potter and Malcolm, although it turned out differently then I thought. And I still like it. Oh yeah and Christoper Lee |
| Morrolan 2007-06-21 ch 19, | abuseLove this. |
| thepenultimatefailure 2007-02-23 ch 3, | abusevery funny |
| defiant 2006-03-21 ch 1, anon. | abuse(All Harry got was a scar shaped like a lightning bolt. He also gained the ability to talk to snakes, and other reptiles. As a result, he is the only person in the Greater London Area who honestly understands what lawyers are talking about The part about lawyers made me laugh out loud at work! |
| wild wolf free17 2005-09-06 ch 19, | abuseWonderful job! I laughed out out loud during some parts. |
| The One Who Creeps You Out 2005-04-23 ch 2, | abuseI've never seen a story like this before, gots me interested. |
| Chicklepea 2004-12-15 ch 19, | abuseHey doll, love the story, i rarley read this crossover, but hey, theres a first time for everything. I finally finished this one, and now im going to toddle off and read all about his second year, are you gonna do a third year? anyway, gonna go now, take care xx chicklepea. oh yeah and by the way, I like how you ignore whats going on with Harry and them. Everyone knows the story, and the irony is enjoyable. Its asthough your telling the other half of a story we already know. |
| Ezmerelda 2004-11-29 ch 19, | abuseI laughed so hard at some points that I couldn't catch my breath - one point in particular - Dewey facing down the Dementor! Loved it, thanks for writing! ~"~ |
| Chicklepea 2004-11-13 ch 13, | abuseHey love the story, Im going to bed now and i'm just reviewing to remember where im up to. I'll review properly when i get to the end. take care xx chicklepea |
| Ouatic-7 2004-09-28 ch 19, | abuseNot a Harry Potter fan and I gave up on Malcolm in the Middle when Francis was in Alaska. However, this was really fun. I liked that Malcolm only occasionally interacted with the main characters, except Malfoy; that he didn't all of a sudden become buddies with Potter. The characterization of Lois and Dewey seemed spot on to me (not saying others were OOC but thoae two were notably well done). Maybe you have done some revisions since the author's notes about who Camilla is but it seemed perfectly clear to me that she was the fat girl who was gloing to lose weight for Malcolm's pretty face. I'll have to read the sequel. |
| NightRain2 2004-09-24 ch 19, | abuseWow, I really enjoyed this. I was highly impressed by how you managed to portray Draco so very well. His character is designed to irritate, and you managed to show how someone could be friends with him without changing his character. ^_^ Very impressed, I know I couldn't have done it. I've only seen one or two eps of Malcom, but I LOVED this story. It was hysterical. ^_^ |
| Hedlund 2004-09-16 ch 19, | abuseWow. This must be the best crossover I've ever read (You can take that as a compliment on your work, or as critique on all other crossovers – whatever that makes you happy). I must read all your other stories now. |