Awesome story! I loved the ending. Great work, I hope you continue to write more stories!

Ahh no, I cant believe this is the end. I cant even get enough-
I just loved it all, thank you for your hard work, your ideas, your writing, your dedication, your everything. I really enjoyed all this fic since beginning to end, I just dont know how to express my gratitute and love because this story was good.

Just good work, and tons of thanks for sharing this and keep the good work. I'll keep you tracked, your works are really well done and you just.. .sdkflsdfd-
Im getting at a loss of words 'cause you're just awesome ;_;

Just THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU

Eeeeeeeeee You've uploaded it! And this final chapter is super duper sweeeet! Awww for everything I can't describe as more as I can.

(A sequel? :D)

well the story is finally over it was a fun ride... thank you for finishing this story...

And once again you made me wonder if you abandoned this or something. But, clearly, you haven't. Just maybe procrastinated a little. But you updated on a lovely day - the weather's nice and it's the weekends! Hee hee, gotta admit, there's a lot of sappy dialogue, but I guess I should have predicted that it would come with the scenes.

And booooooo, bad endings after all this?! No way, I would totally never forgive you after all those beautiful chapters! But at least you didn't. Even if you were sick and all, you made sure it was all happy and dandy Hee hee, a congrats to you for that! :D

Just an epilogue to go! Wonder how that'll go.

Ahh, I cant believe this story is coming to its end. I really enjoyed this fic in all the goods and bads, all this time was totally worth it.(Even tho sometimes I felt like it was a dropped project but NOPE I know you take your time and make the best out of it)

I just really feel emotional over all this chapter, my respects to you /bows.
So lets just wait for the epilogue and let me just keep praising your amazing work n.n

Wow... I'm sorry for not reviewing TT_TT but all this time I didn't have a computer or cellphone to even read the fic /sob.
But now I'm back and crying because... Wally is what? Wait, I go away... for almost a 6 month or less and then I find Wally is 'almost' dead? Or dead for ALL I UNDERSTAND orz.
I'm sorry I just... /sob what the, when did everything turn out like this... I had to re-read like... 5 episodes before this to make sure I was reading the same fic... and and... WAAAAAAAALLY! /cries
I hope he revives magically or.. IDK I just... can't accept his dead :(

Besides my original whining I was gonna say that: You keep writing so beautiful and your idea and the composition of every part of the fic is so well done and I just can't say how much I love this fic because I just too much for words.
Just, keep writing and keep taking your time because every minute you spend of this is reflected on the words and the greatness of this fic uvu.

WALLY! NOO! Don't die! Please! TT_TT
Can't wait for the next chapter! Please update :)

Okay, I seriously thought you'd never update again and that this was a dead fic. If you weren't dead yourself, anyway. So I'm suuuuuuuuuuuper duper wuper happy that you did now - I've been wondering so much about what would be happening!

-BUT DID YOU HAVE TO KILL HIM OFF AGAIN

This is getting really good! I hope they find Norma in time. Walter!

Keep up the good work! :)

I hope they find her soon enough. Every time that Schwartz showed up, I thought that the black cloud she brought with her was poisonous. It would be awful if that was the case.

I hope that your new computer will stop being a boob and work right! Update when you can, ok?

Who takes a nap in a place like that.

Canon is fun. Diverging from canon is even /more/ fun. :DDDD

I kinda found Senel's and Wally's bonding a bit /too/ quick to happen, and maybe a bit OOC, but I'll let that slide. For once. Because I love a good story and they're always hard to find :DDDDD

...I like the scene with the curious, young upstart...I found it very amusing that the kid had your typical fascination with superheroes and fables that we come to expect from kids, and Wally did just the same for that moment. I giggled when the kid asked for a name, and he answered, "Oh, just call me Walter...", heh. I guess it just sounded like a common name, like Bob, for why I found it so funny.

I like you're writing style; you seem to have a broader vocabulary than I do. A lot of my own descriptions are usually over-generic, but yours actually seem closer to natural. Being too generic with my descriptions and dialogue are one of my problems. That's an area that I would like to improve in.

Sorry, I was too busy to review the last chapters!

In any case, I hope they find Norma soon! She shouldn't be out there like that. But I have this feeling that Walter is going to smack her when she recovers... *hint hint*

You know, he's kinda like her reluntant guardian angel with purple wings of glitter. She should feel happy!

AND NOWWWWWWWWW WE HAVE DEATH'S GRAND ENTRANCEEEEEE :P lol.

'Changes his role in the story?' Do you mean that it wasn't the group who found Norma, but Wally instead as a change? I recall vaguely reading that somewhere... or something that sounded similiar enough.

Oh, then happy in-advance birthday to you! Ah Can't believe this thing will be ending so soon... I feel like there's a lot more left to write about, like the other character quests. But oh well.