You got it right! Lovely fic!

touching, very believable, great.

I really love Ladyhawke... It was maybe the first fantasy I've ever seen.

I love how self-contained this is. I can't think of anything you could add to improve it.

This is really touching and lovely. Beautifully written. :)

what an excellent study of the difficulties of adjusting to normality; I love this movie and I appreciate the deep thought in this.