|Reviews for Bionicle: Demon's Keep|
| Belgarion1999 3/4/13 . chapter 1
I just had to write that anyway super job can't wait until my story comes into action! B1999
Monazumma wants a donut! Monazumma wants a chance at kicking P. Obama' T. Get it? Monazumma
( monazumma is my game name for Age of Empires). ;-)
| Watcher in the dark 2/12/13 . chapter 29
I sense an epic battle sequence coming...
| Remepie 12/11/12 . chapter 27
Yes! UPDATE! WOOOOOOOOOOH XD 3 Great job! Glad to see more Gali and Pohatu 3 My Gali/Kopaka feels are on the run again w Again, awesome job and keep going! Can't wait for the next update!
| Watcher in the dark 8/19/12 . chapter 27
| Jazzyart 6/26/12 . chapter 26
Yay, new chapter!
really good! pouks is a skinker, ain't he? XD
| Wanderling 2/11/12 . chapter 25
the search for Keetongu! onewa's personality is well-done :D dont see any plot problems and the story is looking good! cant wait for the next one!
| Nameless reviewer 2/4/12 . chapter 25
Lewa rocks this chappie, he's Hali's super duper big brother! nice to see an update. Will they find keetongu?
| InTheLight-Hija 2/3/12 . chapter 25
HAH! Yeah, Onewa, don't underestimate a Toa of Air! Especially Lewa at that. Haha, so glad you're updating again, Dc! Luv the title. And how epic the fight with the evil snake-thing was. Really good detail there. And poor little, scared Hahli... at least she has her big, bright-minded brother to protect her! xD
Can't wait for more updates from you! Doing a marvelous job :)
| Wanderling 11/23/11 . chapter 24
wow! Onewa sounds so different! heh. big suprise for Lewa! :D and Hahli is so cute :3 who's perspective is next? will people be teaming up again eventually? it will be interesting to hear all the toa metru finally meeting the toa mata again, and how they all seem so different. XD hurry with the next chapter! and sorry it took so long for me to respond, we just finsihed 1st trimester. ::glares at papers and study sheets left over from finals::
| InTheLight-Hija 11/16/11 . chapter 24
AHHHH WHAT THE HECK IS ONEWA? Turtle? xD
Haha, anyway, I nearly jumped for joy on seeing you'd updated. Hahli is just way too cute for her own good, and I loved how Lewa came up with ways to keep her from getting too scared or worried, hence the camping trip. And the flashback was awesome. Somehow, I thought of Gibbs when the gut feeling was mentioned... XD
| Wanderling 10/26/11 . chapter 23
mysterious book? awesome :D 3 books! and a mysterious perosn too! i like how gali saved him - an excellent plan. poor takua is traumatized though
| InTheLight-Hija 10/25/11 . chapter 23
I wonder what's with the untitled book they found? And I just about fell out of my seat when they realized they had locked themselves into a room with four Visorak. xD Luckily a certain random someone was there to save the day, lol. Keep up the great job!
| Wanderling 9/24/11 . chapter 22
wow! poor Mihkoro! thinking of what happened in the movie, will the changes be reversed eventually? to all of them? oooh!big question! don't tell me the answer though! but if you can give a vague one thats ok, keeping me wondering about it! thanks for posting it so soon :D
| Otto92 9/23/11 . chapter 22
Awwwwwwww! D: Poor Mihkoro and Jaller. Also, a snake? Really?
| InTheLight-Hija 9/23/11 . chapter 22
Oh my goodness, it finally happened... Mihkoro's transformation I mean, DX. I recalled reading that sneak peak you gave me awhile back while reading this, but this time around it seems even more dramatic and sad. Poor Mihkoro! And poor Jaller! And Hera's dead! :O I didn't see that one coming, sadly. Overall, this certainly does underline how horrid and uncaring Roodaka really is. It's very well done, Dc.