|Reviews for Bionicle: Demon's Keep|
| Wanderling 9/17/11 . chapter 21
O.o WHAT DOES ONUA LOOK LIKE! AH! im very curious! this wasa great chapter by the way. as much as i dislike it happening, it makes sense that at least one of them would get hit, but why didnt the Visorak capture him? i cant wait to see what happens next!
| InTheLight-Hija 9/14/11 . chapter 21
Oh wow... you weren't kidding when you said it was going to be odd. O_O Poor Onua! Bone spikes? I'm having trouble picturing those, but I can see him with the hand claws alright xD Once again you've written a great chapter! :D
| ottoXmandarin92 9/14/11 . chapter 21
Of all the things Onua could have asked about, he had to ask in he had any hot pink feathers. XD That sounds like Onua in way. Love the chapter, Dc. Amazing as usual.
| ottoXmandarin92 8/25/11 . chapter 20
Awesomeness! As usual, of course. Poor Lewa, he has no wings and his back hurt. Plus life seems to hate Kopaka. XD
| Wanderling 8/25/11 . chapter 20
Excellent chapter! im gald Onua and kopaka and lewa finally got to meet up! hopefully we'll hear more of them? :D hury hurry!
| InTheLight-Hija 8/25/11 . chapter 20
Ahh! Lewa's found out he's a big brother! How awesome! :D It was a good idea to write a chapter featuring family stuff more than all the constant danger-trouble they've been through. And Kopaka's reminiscence on his sisters and family was a sad/sweet touch too. Keep up the awesome work!
| Wanderling 8/15/11 . chapter 19
Nuju! :D but Whenua! he can't be dead, right? and then the have to seperate... im glad Takua is found though. You left a lot hanging :P I wanna see what happens next! :D
| InTheLight-Hija 8/15/11 . chapter 19
Yes, I've been looking forward to this! As you know, Nuju's 'dika is pretty cool-neat, and I like how the chapter followed Pohatu and Gali. But who's the, um, dead lady? D:
AND TAKUA! 8D you actually brought him in! Sweet!
| ottoXmandarin92 8/14/11 . chapter 19
AWESOME! Takua sounds adorable and I feel bad for his mother. That was his mother right?
| Wanderling 8/6/11 . chapter 18
i really like this chapter :D it was sweet and serious at the same time! i do have a question though. In the chapter, where this:
"Yeah, it's me. We came back because six years is far too long to be away from home. As for the others…" His smile faded. "Toa Lhikan died to protect us shortly after we got back, and the remaining six of us were split up. I…I don't know where the others are. It was just lucky that Toa Nokama found me when she did. Otherwise…" He sighed, shaking his head a little."
is said... wouldnt Matau already know what Tahu explained becuase he met Kopaka and Lewa? kinda confused...
otherwise, what will the next chapter be about?
| Playing.with.FireFlys 8/6/11 . chapter 18
Such a good story! :D
| InTheLight-Hija 8/4/11 . chapter 18
Aww, the closing scene was perfect! There can still be peace during a living nightmare I was so happy when Matau found Hlahlu! Like, really, really happy (GO MATAU!). And at least he's with Nokama and Tahu now, too. I can't wait for the next chapter!
| InTheLight-Hija 7/19/11 . chapter 17
Yes, Vakama's not entirely evil-bad! And you've finally brought in Hlahlu! :D I can't believe what Roodaka had planned to do with Hlahlu though... dirty witch of a queen. Good thing Vakama took action in the end. I sure hope Roodaka believes him... xD And hopefully Hlahlu will be alright. Sad that she's lost her memories.
| Wanderling 7/19/11 . chapter 17
i was at my email, and then the update for this storyappeared in the inbox! xD beautiful timing!
anyway, brave Vakama! i like him in this fic much more than movie!Vakama. he seems more realistic cus people are not always perfectly honest or completely loyal. if feel like he could change sides and leave Roodaka... hopeful thought, never know though! the others would likely have trouble trusting him anyway.
speaking of Roodaka, i like how you described her, it definitly fits who she is. webs! :D shes so devious, its a great ideea for her to have a back up plan in a matoran too. will she find/go after Hlahlu or just use a different matoran? oooo can't wait for next chapter! and this one was an excellent lenght too!
| ottoXmandarin92 7/19/11 . chapter 17
EPICNESS! 8D The beginning part was a bit creepy but like the rest awesome. I want to punch Roodaka for what she did to Hlahlu.