This chapter put a smile on my face D Great writing!

If you made Liv having a Jim's baby I could be in jail by what I should do to you, LOL jk

I'm not gonna lie, I LOVED the tension, but, please, say it's done now!

I loved it ! Even though there's no baby :( bummer ! Keep writing . You're doing a great job

finally she's going in the right direction.

So, I usually never review stories because I can never find the words to show how I feel about them. Sometimes I feel so fake writing "I loved it, more soon." because it doesn't feel heartfelt.

Buttttt, since I always threaten your sensitive babymaker, I decided I should leave you something.

I really did love it. I have loved it. I love that with your words I can picture what's happening.

You're amazing. 3

Yippee...doin' the happy dance!

Awesome chapter! I love where this is going and it is beautifully written-very nice!

This is awesome! Please update soon! (:

wowowowow! I didn't expected that!

I knew it ! Damn ! I hope the father is who I think it is ...

AMAZING!

YOU WROTE THE HELL OUT OF THIS STORY AND IF YOU DON'T CONTINUE, I WILL HUNT YOU DOWN AND PUT YOUR ASS IN JAIL UNDER FALSE PRETENSES. LMAO HAHA

LOVE YA HUN! :)

i'm guessing it's Jim's since she used condom with Elliot...no mention of rubber between her and Jim. Can't take it anymore.

Well damn!

This is my favorite chapter I think of any story. It was powerful, nasty, and spontaneous. I'm taken back cuz I definitely wasn't expecting it.

God I wanted Elliot then! I loved it, he made me...oh well you don't need to know. hahahaha

Continue you dammit or I may have a heart attack.

p.s. I seriously read this Ch. 5 TIMES before I continued. lol I'm a freak...I know! :)

I'm going to do a premature fist pump, since I know you're not mean enough to make the baby be Jim's. Gotta love the idea of an EO baby

:o Ohhh! Is it Elliot's?

Update!