I love it! Of course ... if you do make it into a Tommy/Lily story I would love it more!

Can u please go on with this story. I can't wait to find out what happens next

pls go on

Ooh, this looks intriguing. What a great setting!

oohhh. nice start. i hope you continue. i love your scenery and my favorite line was when tommy said i turned at the coconut treee. i can see him getting defensive about that.

PLEASE continue :) its great

Nice story, interested to see where it goes!

Oh my god - a cliffie ending! :-) How I love it! :-)

Great descriptions in the beginning - wonderful. I am all for descriptions! Because it makes me, as a reader, see what you are imagining! Loved it very much!

And I do love your plot ... Lily and Tommy, both somewhere unknown in the jungle, probably both hurt! Isn't that great? :-) I love storylines like that - and as you haven't categorised this story as "complete", I am hoping you'll continue this as soon as possible! :-) Can't wait to read on, find out more about what happened to Lily and Tommy, and who those men are that came up behind my favorite characters! :-)

Well, well done! This story has already become an addiction! :-)

Take care,

Kat