|Reviews for The Sentinels Of New Vegas|
| Raven R 3/31/11 . chapter 3
I forgot to add this, but Liz has super speed and strength but doesn't show it to the group because she doesn't trust them, and goes on a killing rage that shows these powers when she sees arcade gannon
| Solomon Vazquez 3/30/11 . chapter 1
Name: Dr. F (Deathclaw Recombination subject F)
Age: aprox. 225 years
Race: Human/deathclaw mixture
Where they come from: Navvaro
Appearance:Roughly 7 to 8 feet tall, scales on forearms and back, deathclaw claw on right hand, and human hand on left hand, Green eyes and red, full hair. Muscular. Smells like sweat due to pheromone gene accident. Horns sharp as hell.
Clothing: None save for authority glasses, old world khakis that are too small for him, and a right power armor boot.
Personality: Very outward, especially to fellow mutants. He enjoys coloring with scavenged paint, composing music, and poetry. He takes offense to people criticizing him because he is half deathclaw. However he hasn't had many friends due to his appearance, and is rather awkward in conversation.
Past: His birth name was Brian Watt, and was born in the Norh-Western commonwealth, but raised in Los Angeles by his father, who was an enclave officer. Though he was meant to be one of the residents of the Los Angeles vault, he didn't make it in time for the bombs, and stowed away on his dad's vertibird. Upon realizing this, the Enclave killed his father and used him in a risky deathclaw expirement. The expirement was a sucsess, but he was the only one who has survived to present day. He was romantically involved with one of the other subjects,(I'll leave the name to you) but she ended up going feral and he had to kill her out of love. Now he roams from one mutant settlement to another, trying to find peace.
Weapons: Fights with hands, teeth, and feet.
Skills: Unarmed, Science, and Speech.
Where would they be found for recruitment: Jacobstown, with Marcus
Why they would be found there: Helping fend off a wave of bad guys (horde?) and helping Dr. Henry with various things.
Strengths: Strength, obviously. He leans more toward the New Vegas deathclaw variant, rather than the Capitol Wasteland Variant. Also has an innate knowledge of all things Enclave and the ability to use power armor. High speech skill, but that doesn't apply to regular, day to day interaction. Can communicate with other deathclaws.
Weaknesses: His right foot has been severely injured in a run in with enclave two years back in DC, and has a sensitivity to light.
Permission to kill them off?: Absolutely. Though I don't think it's very likely. :P
Anything else you want to add: You should recruit Ulysses.
| ELMO-fAN cLUB MeMbER 3/30/11 . chapter 3
lol...liz reminds me of how I act in the game I always use blades
| ELMO-fAN cLUB MeMbER 3/30/11 . chapter 1
Name: Dexter Beckham
Where they come from: Capitol Wasteland
Appearance: Pale skin,Brown hair cut military style,Brown goatee,Athletic muscular,Pointy elf like ears, Elf like features,Long legs and arms,Chocolate brown eyes,
Clothing:A long ankle length sand colored trench coat,Brown cargo pants,Black combat boots,Black long sleeve T-short,Black leather gloves,A large olive green scarf.
Personality: Hes a nice guy and fun to hang around. He can also make friends easily. But he ca nbe serious when the time calls. He loves makeing jokes and can be a bit random at also kind of crazy and loves adventure.
Past: He was born in Megaton, at age 16 he ventured out into the world.
Weapons: An Ak-47 with a red dot scope. It also has a flashlight on it. He has a sawn-off shotgun for backup.
Skills: Sneak,Guns,and Science
Where would they be found for recruitment: Wandering the wasteland
Why they would be found there: Because hes an adventuer!
Strengths: Hes very fast,quiet,and good at stealing things.
Weaknesses: Hes stubborn,he can be a little loud some times.
Permission to kill them off?: Please don't...lol
Anything else you want to add:He killed a rogue resident of the vault and stole his pip-boy.
| King Kubar 3/30/11 . chapter 3
Awesome, the fight scene was not half bad. Trust me i know how hard it can be to make them in detail but yours was cool. I like how Frank got beaten at first, something about arrogant people like him(not insulting your character, its just a personal thing. I like Frank though, makes me laugh.) getting whats coming to them just makes me happy. I also like how he turned the tables and took Liz down a peg, the character seemed to perfect in my eyes. I'm wondering how Frank just got the power boost to take her down, all things considered but still awesome.
I did find Frank somewhat different this time, more silly than before. Not that its bad but it seems like a sudden change. Keep it up, it works well. Especially how he reacts to Esekia, that was truly humorous.
| UndeadSloth 3/28/11 . chapter 1
Name: Daniel "Dan" Smith
Where they come from: A vault
Appearance: Shaggy dark brown hair, and grayish blue eyes.
Clothing: He just wears a Merc outfit. ( wiki/File:Armor_merc_ )
Personality: He's talktive, and likes picking on people, he always thinks everything is cool, But he would never betray his friends or companions.
Past: He used to live in a vault, but he managed to escape when some bullies from the vault were chasing him. Some time after he escaped some slavers captured him, he got his liberty with a game of poker.
Weapons: Machete, Varmint rifle and 10mm SMG
Skills: Repair and Sneak
Where would they be found for recruitment: In New Vegas
Why they would be found there: He's there betting he could win everyone in poker.
Strengths: He's a good Mechanic and likes to invent things.
Weaknesses: He's always at long range from enemys, so he's very easy to defeat in melee.
Permission to kill them off?: Yeah, Kill him if you want, show his brain! heart! and Chocolate!
Anything else you want to add: CHOCOLATE!
| Kid Funny 3/28/11 . chapter 2
Age: 19 (biologically 223)
Where they come from: New York City
Appearance:Wasters Hair style, with light green tinted skin
Clothing: Merc Adventurer wit biker goggles
Personality: Cocky, funny, finds himself a ladies man but sadly isn't true. will stop to make a funny remark even when getting shot at, ex: ever notice we have the technology to build a giant walking robot on the east coast but haven't yet repaired a car. Has a deep respect for his father but hasn't always seen eye to eye with him, ex: putting human brains into robots. On he karma level he would be in the gray leaning more toward negative, only because of his father's teaching in shrewd business. His hopeless romantic demeanor could put him a odds with Esekia when he tries to flirt cass (if you allow it)
Past: Born during 2058 Sonny house is the son of Mr. House and Jane (human counterpart). He was born prematurely and blind. the doctors told his father he didn't expect Sonny to live past 3. Not settling for the doctor's explanation, Mr. House implanted Sonny with a prototype Apollo sub-dermal armor implant, same as the Nemean implant you can purchase at New Vegas medical clinic, only this uses the power of the sun to strengthen cell growth, the side affects of the prototype was it gives the person a greenish tone because of all he chlorophyll that is needed to help recover cells. It's kind of like the solar power .House also built roboic eyes for him to help see, he can only see in black in white ( he calls it his dog vision) in 2077, 3 days before the bombs fell his father invited him to the Lucky 38 to help him run the casino, while House waited for the platinum chip. he stood with his father as the bombs almost took out Las Vegas. sensing the danger Mr. House ordered his securitrons to take Sonny to the basement and put him in cryo-stasis until Las Vegas became safe or when the platinum chip was fully installed into all the securitrons. His chamber opens after the last securitron is fully upgraded
Weapons: he uses a self made laser pistol that has a beam slitter on it and what he thinks are his dashingly good looks
Skills: the3 tag skills would be energy repair, energy weapons, and speech if there was a 4th one i would probably be barter
Where would they be found for recruitment: in the basement of Lucky 38 looking for his dad
Why they would be found there: his hatch just opened
Strengths: can reprogram most robots, is a shrewd businessman, can rarely be severely hurt in the sun, and a great comic relief character.
Weaknesses: his unnecessary love of women his tinkering with robots and talks with people can get him in trouble. at night he is more susceptible to damage. He also shares the same fascination with trinkets as his father, although his are novelty toys such as toy dinosaurs rather than snow globes
Permission to kill them off?: sure if you deem it necessary
Anything else you want to add: his name is a pun Sonny the son of Robert House and Sonny as in Sunny.
He likes to party?
| DirtyBlue929 3/27/11 . chapter 1
Name: Abdul Adl (arabic: Servant of the Just)
Race: Human (supposedly)
Where they come from: New Canaan
Appearance: Dark brown-black hair, caucasian (white)
Clothing: Headwrap covering most of his face and head. Leather armor, again covering most of his body.
Personality: Cold, devoted to his faith. Stubborn when in arguments, and while accepting of other faiths, he despises intolerance of his own religion.
Past: Shunned for his faith, despite New Canaan's offical tolerance of religion. Ashamed at his lack of acceptance, Abdul entered a self-imposed exile, seeking to "prove himself in the eyes of the Almighty". He has wandered the desert for years, helping those who cannot help themselves.
Weapons: Chinese officer's sword, .357 revolver as a sidearm. Can handle a rifle but prefers what he has.
Skills: Melee, Medicine, some Small Guns
Where would they be found for recruitment: Any remote community, Goodsprings, Novac, etc.
Why they would be found there: He has wandered the desert for years, seeking enlightenment. Came to the Mojave seeking a cause to fight for.
Strengths: Exceedingly loyal to good people. Willing to fight anyone who opposes Islam.
Weaknesses: Frank is not a good person. Can be blinded by his faith at times.
Permission to kill them off?: Sure, why not?
Anything else you want to add: The "?" by human is for a reason. He refuses to remove his clothing in public out of shame. No, this is not meant to be stereotypical of Islam. You can poke fun at that if you want though :)
| motordog 3/27/11 . chapter 1
-Name: Krishna Prasad
-Age: 245 (envisions herself as early 20's)
-Race: (human, super mutant, ghoul .etc) Disembodied human brain encased in a modified Mr. Gutsy
-Nationality: Former citizen of Great Britain
-Where they come from: Vault 79 (South of Las Vegas, in the Mojave National Preserve)
-Appearance: Krishna's robotic body resembles a standard Mr. Gutsy, but with a uniform, blue-steel color, and white lights. It's central arm ends in a highly articulated artificial 'hand', and the two remaining arms end in plasma weapons. It's standard voice has been replaced with Krishna's own cultured, slightly British-accented voice, but she can switch to the standard voice and back if she wishes to do so. Her VR avatar is (usually) an idealized version of her old self, an attractive woman of Indian descent.
-Personality: While exploring this strange new world, Krishna will be as cautious as she can be. She'll allow others to believe she is merely a machine if it suits her purposes, but will confide in someone if it looks like they have a good chance of helping her in her mission. She'll be willing to do some unethical things to get the job done, but probably won't go so far as to commit cold-blooded murder.
-Past: Vault 79 was concieved as a type of time capsule of brilliant minds, built using technology and researched pioneered by the likes of Dr. Braun and Prof. Calvert (who turned down their own invitations to join this project). 100 leading scientists and thinkers entered the automated vault, where their brains were removed from their bodies and placed in life support. Their minds were then hooked up to an elaborate virtual reality system, where they were allowed to induldge their slightest whims in perfect computer simulations. Each resident could stay in their own private reality, go to a neutral salon area to socialize with other residents, or enter a shared stage where anyone could reshape reality as they wished (though safety measures protected the residents from each other). After 200 years, an automated cloning mechanism was to clone each residents' original body, age it to young adulthood, remove the clone's empty brain and replace it with the original brain, allowing all to live once more as a living, moving, complete being in young, strong bodies. As sometimes happens, things didn't work out that way...
Though built in a remote area, a stray missile detonated close enough to the vault to cause some damage to the delicate computer systems, too much for the automated repair systems to handle. The deadline came and went, and the program didn't end. From internal sensors, the residents were able to determine the problem. Some were so used to the way things were, they didn't even want to leave, and they may have all decided to stay in the program forever, until they started disappearing one by one. Additional damage was causing life support to fail, and as each brain's unit failed, it's corresponding VR avatar winked out forever.
It was decided that one of their number would need to leave the system and investigate fully. An emergency prodecure allowed a single brain to be physically moved into a modified Mr. Gutsy, granting the brain the ability to directly control the robot as it's own body. Krishna was chosen as she had specialties in cybernetics, robotics and computer systems, and she was an adventureous, courageous individual by nature. The proceedure was a success, and Krishna was able to determine the mechanisms were unrepairable without certain components (and possibly some assistance). Even the cloning systems were damaged. In her final message to her stranded fellow residents, she decided to leave the vault and travel north to Las Vegas, to see if she could find what was needed to save them all.
-Weapons: The Mr. Gutsy has been modified with slightly tougher armor plating, increasing her resistance slightly to pulse weapons (at least compared to other robotic targets). The flame thrower as been removed and replaced with a second plasma unit, and both plasma units have been upgraded to plasma rifle output, and modified with magnetic accelerators. The final arm has been modified to allow it to grab and move items, and perform delicate manipulations. It's sensors have nightvision capabilities.
-Skills: Specializes in Medicine, Repair and Science, and pretty good with Energy Weapons
-Where would they be found for recruitment: Where you need her to be.
-Why they would be found there: Looking for either tech know-how, or advanced parts.
-Strengths: A robotic body, powerful plasma weapons, infrared sensors
-Weaknesses: A robotic body (though she has some extra shielding versus pulse weapons and an internal repair mechanism, she'd still take quite a bit of damage from such an attack).
-Permission to kill them off?: Sure
-Anything else you want to add: I figure she could help in the tech end of things, and Courier might like a nest of Pre-War scientists just south of him owing him a huge favor.
| King Kubar 3/27/11 . chapter 2
I lie it so far, Not sure if you are still excepting character but here's one.
Race: Super-Mutant Behemoth
Where they come from: Capitol Wasteland
Appearance: Twenty feet tall, heavy muscle and broad shouldered. Grayish-green skin, pure black eyes that permanently tear. Unlike other Behemoths he does not hunch over. Two gore marks(pierced by horns) in his chest around the heart.
Clothing: Ragged leather boots and shorts, obviously oversized. Armor covers his torso and shoulders, legs and forearms made of Radscorpion shell. Keeps a shopping cart on his back as a carrying case. Around his neck are the severed heads of ghouls.
Personality: Very slow but aggressive. He he attack anything in rage if it is to confusing. If someone else is around him that can figure it out he lets them. Loves dogs, and Brahmin. Fanatical hatred of ghouls, but if calmed down enough to see they aren’t feral he will accept them. Once he see them at first he will attack, but if already knows he will remember and stay his hand. Loves to cook, and is quite good at it. Looking for a purpose, someone to protect.
Past: Like most of his kind Goliath he was a berserk monster that would attack anything in sight. Most would run or not be a challenge, but that Changed when he met a large Deathclaw. It rivaled him in size and they fought but the Deathclaw won. Being terribly wounded itself if left before finishing Goliath off, leaving him crippled in the wastes.
As luck would have it instead of the creatures of the wastes finding him a group of humans did. One order of their leader they set up camp and cared for the creature. Without activity Goliath calmed, taking in his surrounding and the human caring for him. He learned their names, what they could do and how they felt about him. The leader was hoping he would protect them for saving him, never having met a super-mutant before. Goliath learned that the youngest, a girl named Veronica, simply wanted him to feel better.
On the day he was fully healed he stayed still, thinking on what to do. It was a first; he never had to think before. But it was not quiet. He heard yelling, screaming and looked around. Yao Guai, many of them were storming the camp. The humans fired, hoping to scare them off but they were not deterred. A few died but most reached them, cornering them at the mountain side. The humans shook with fear, and the Yao Guai roared. Ready to pounce, the stopped at a snapping sound. The humans looked on; Goliath was breaking free of the restraints placed on him to keep him still as they healed him. HE stood tall and powerful, arms raised up and glaring at the creature.
He roared, thundering across the entire wasteland. The Yao Guai charged, but Goliath struck them down with his bare hands. When he was done he looked to the humans, they looked back unsure. Veronica however stepped forward. He called her name slowly, speaking for the first in a long time. She smiled and put her arm out, patting his head. From then on he followed them, protecting them from harm. But that night was not for him alone, another heard his call and it was angry.
They gave Goliath his name, taught him to cook and how to find food so he didn’t eat people or raw meet. They grew as family, hunted dangerous creatures to barter with their parts, found treasures. For many years they were happy.
One day they were in a particularly dangerous area, high radiation levels, lot of creatures, etc. it was night when they made camp, but Veronica wanted to scout. The leader said to bring Goliath, just in case. She gowned, but accepted. It was mostly quiet, Veronica was even starting to get bored bit Goliath went rigid. Heavy breathing filled the air, the ground quaked. Goliath and Veronica turned, and before them looked like the devil himself. Standing as tall as Goliath, reptilian with a twisting tail and giant claws, two monstrous horns aimed forward. The Great Death Claw he fought returned. Veronica was frozen in fear; Goliath pulled her back as the Deathclaw charged. It cored Goliath, around his heart as he held the creature by the horns. Despite his strength he was pushed back. He yelled for Veronica to run, she did. When she was gone Goliath pushed the Death claw away and began to grapple with the creature. They were even until Goliath heard a scream. Using all his strength he snapped the Death claws neck and left without making sure it was dead.
He rushed to the camp, but what he saw horrified him. Ghouls, feral monstrosities and slaughtered his family, ate them alive. He saw Veronica, a Ghoul’s hand clawing at her body. And then his rage returned, his mind snapped and eyes went black. He roared and stormed the feral beasts, his rage as great as any nuclear device.
When it was over, he fell to his knees crying. For days he was still, unmoving as a statue. When he recovered he buried them then wandered, unsure of what to do with his life.
-Giant Mace: A Large metal pole with Deathclaw claws running through as spikes and tipped at the top with a Radscorpion stinger.
-Radscprpion Shield: a large shield made of Radscorpion shell.
Where would they be found for recruitment: Wandering the wastes near Camp Searchlight, or on Black Mountain .
Why they would be found there: Wondering around and just happened to see Ghouls went into rage and it was reported. If on Black Mountain he is looking for advice, Word got to Marcus who told the Currier.
| Dommmm 3/27/11 . chapter 1
Name: Valentina Ivanov
Race: (human, super mutant, ghoul .etc) Human
Nationality: (American, British, Russian .etc) Russian
Where they come from: (capital wasteland, a vault, point lookout, the pitt .ect) Vault 16
Appearance: 6''1 tall. Tanned skin, and platinum blonde hair that goes halfway down her back (her brown roots show) far-set slip shaped brown eyes, button nose and heart-shaped thick lips with a coating of red lipstick. Rather large breast. Slim figure.
Clothing: White tank top with a tight black ripped leather jacket over it. Tight black jeans, and ankle-high black high heels.
Personality: Determined. The kind of person that doesnt take crap off of anyone. Can be aggressive at times. Wont let anything get in her way, and sees herself as the leader at all times.
Past: Born in the vault, and spent her life inside it. Trained herself to be good with weapons, because she had nothing else to do.
Weapons: (can be personalised if you want) Two .44 magnum revolvers.
Skills: (example: medicine, unarmed, science .etc) Leadership. Brains. Stealth.
Where would they be found for recruitment: Inside the vault, it was being invaded by whatever the baddies are in this story, and she was leading the attack against them, trying to fight back. Both her parents and ten year old sister are killed in this battle.
Why they would be found there: She was born there.
Strengths: Doesnt let anything get in her way. Fast runner. Stealthy.
Weaknesses: Over-courageous. Trusts people too easily.
Permission to kill them off?: I think I'd prefer it if you did, but later on, sacrificing herself for the rest of the team. You can keep her alive if you wish.
Anything else you want to add: If I got anything wrong, let me know.
| zeldagamer96 3/26/11 . chapter 2
Oh, and the reason zorn isn't a raving animal like other Ghost People is because of the gash that was made in his suit allowed him to keep his mind partially intact because unlike all other Ghost people, he wasnt trapped in his suit completely
| zeldagamer96 3/26/11 . chapter 1
Name: Zorn (doesn't remember real name)
Race: Ghost Person, male
Nationality: American, caucasian
Where they come from: Pre-war Sierra Madre
Appearance: 5'9, skinny with long legs and muscular arms, red glowing eyes
Clothing: Full body hazmat suit with a large gash in the neck
Personality: Abrasive, keeps to himself unless he is needed, intelligent yet charges in during a battle
Past: Pre-war technician who was in charge of the Sierra Madre security systems, had a family of three including himself with a wife and daughter, specialist in holographic tech.
Weapons: Unique explosives; Holo-bombs/mines, The cloud bombs/mines
Skills: Unarmed 35, science 50, repair 80, explosives 100, guns 10, energy weapons 20, survival 55, sneak 42, medicine 20, lockpick 45, barter 5, speech 10
Where would they be found for recruitment: Outside the abandoned BoS bunker
Why would they be found there: He had just made his way into the mojave wasteland
Strengths: Any type of explosive, able to repair and maintain weapons, helpful in survival situations, resourceful, able to discern weaknesses in enemies
Weaknesses: Weak limbs, able to be manipulated by women who resemble his wife(brunette, around 5'6, long curls in her hair, curvy in the breasts, small butt, blue eyes), difficulty breathing in intense situations due to malfunction in rebreather, will not kill without provocation but once provoked is hard to stop
Permission to kill off: It's your story, your call.
Anything else: He is always suspicious of people who talk to him, he never likes to be out in the open without cover due to his years in the confines of the villa, fame means nothing to him
| NikkaPlz 3/26/11 . chapter 2
I just thought of something cool! Kofi can also hack into other robots and control them. Wish I woulda added this before but it's here now...ok ok you can kill him but make it a good death/shut down if you do.
| Raven R 3/26/11 . chapter 2
Woot! Thanks for picking my character! I wait eagerly for the next chapter! Yes i know, i sound like a teacher, or something, but I'm not!