   viri24 5/1/12 . chapter 8Wow amazing chapter! Great story please update soon! |
| viri24 5/1/12 . chapter 4 Another awesome chapter! |
| viri24 5/1/12 . chapter 2 Great chapter! |
| viri24 5/1/12 . chapter 1 Cool story I like it. |
| Seven Falls 4/29/12 . chapter 8 Frankly, ignoring whatever the heck they're doing with the real YJ plot, which if you've watched the latest episodes, you'll know it just burned itself to death, is probably a good idea. Your story is far more enjoyable and satisfying than canon at this point. Yay. I hope to see more of it. |
| redrobinfan123 4/29/12 . chapter 8 you have to update soon please please this is so awesome! |
| Weasel Fu 4/27/12 . chapter 8 I really like your story so far! |
| BioTrance 4/24/12 . chapter 8 Wow this is awesome! Oh and little Jason is in it! Ah be good little Jason! Listen to your 'little' brother Tim! Update soon mate, this is a great story. |
| Syl 4/12/12 . chapter 8 Very well-written and suspenseful. I hope you continue. |
| Pirate Queen ofthe 21st centry 4/10/12 . chapter 8 PLEAE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE! :D |
| batman-defeats-all 4/6/12 . chapter 8 This is a really brilliant story. Everyone is perfectly in character, the plot is amazing, and it is just overall great.
Adding in Jason was a great plotline as well... Yeah for Jay... |
| CRUNCHY COOKIE 4/2/12 . chapter 8 UPDATE PLEASE! THIS IS MY FAVORITE STORY OF YOURS:) |
| legolasfan91 3/27/12 . chapter 8 I hope you update soon. |
| Anne Whitehead 3/26/12 . chapter 8 Please update soon this is a great story |
| RedxxxRobin 3/23/12 . chapter 8 THis is amazing! please continue! |
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