Very powerful. We can all guess whose face he sees, but the sorrow lingers longer without direct confirmation.

Good work.

Phantom Jedi

Outstanding as always. And I too would love to know whose face Anakin saw...

Intriguing.

I must know though... whose face does it take?

Wow... This is just amazing. I'm in love with it. The foreshadowing is so creepy, but beautiful. It gave me the chills, especially when Anakin just left at the end.

I really like all of your Star Wars (short) stories. They're amazing.

This is perfect. Perfect. Perfect.

A gem.

Sounds like Anakin when he was younger. Wise in ways others cannot understand and yet such a child and so innocent. I have a tingly feeling that the Dark side uses Padme's face when it appears to him. ;)

Reading this I kept picturing a sinister looking Padme seducing Anakin to the dark side. You always have such a wonderful grasp of the characters. I love the ideas you have about the force and Anakin's turning. You do such amazing foreshadowing, so subtle.

very good. i like it a lot. write another chapter

Whoa. Very Cool. WRITE MORE!

I love the hinted-at implications of this. I've always, personally, seen Padme as Anakin's perfect love, but then I've also always wondered whether she had something to do with his downfall. This was a very poignant dialogue. I'm eagerly looking forward to reading all the rest of your stories! Please keep up the v. good work. Oh, one thing: I'm not sure I understand the significance of the title. Can you explain, perhaps?

Oh gosh...who's face appears? Damn! Guess I'll have to guess. But I really like the story. The dialogue is nice and I like Anakin if the Dark Side has a face. Also the younger kids not wanting to turn off the light is a nice touch.

This is great! I urge you to continue.