my eyes watered, and my chest felt tight. this is what this did to me... wow just, wow.

it's so realistic and painful, you captured the moment and made it real. you should make a sequel.

Awesome story! I loved the interactions between Alex's parents and how you interpreted Alex's madness. It was very chilling.

I liked this VERY MUCH !

PLEASE WRITE ANOTHER CHAPTER :D .

WONDERFUL! I have been waiting for a fic from these characters perspectives! You should post more chapters of this story! that would be great. :)

I always wished there was a little more focus on Lillian and Adam in the actual game. I've written a fic on Lillian, check it out if your interested, not much on Adam though.

As for the fanfic I love it, Lillian seems a little more saner then I imagined after losing Josh, but then again it was perhaps the lonely life she would lead after the incident that shattered her mind.

You portrayed Adam perfectly, focused and angry at Alex but with a touch of guilt for what he's going to do.