Wow. This story has so many layers! Amazing!

I liked this piece. It's very unusual and gives a different view of Padme. There are a few small typos, but nothing major.

this was a really great story! I cannot believe I had never reviewed it before!

I really liked it, which was strange because I usually hate things written in second person. But this was really well done, Great job.

wow, double wow.

that was cool, sad, funny, and smart at the same time. I'm a HUGE fan of your work, and its nice to see star wars portrayed as dark, cool, and satisfyingly gothic.

Thanks.

wow, double wow.

that was cool, sad, funny, and smart at the same time. I'm a HUGE fan of your work, and its nice to see star wars portrayed as dark, cool, and satisfyingly gothic.

Thanks.

uh... *wow*! that was great! i really liked the plot idea because it's just... *different* and your style is amazing. it's... flowing, very good to read. are you a professional writer? i mean... you have a very refinded and personal style. anyway... keep your work up! _