love this so far! hoping to read more of it later!

Oops. Rodgers & Hammerstein is the NEXT generation. This was Oscar Hammerstein, his father.

You're doing fine with LND Erik (but I prefer Ben Lewis to Ramin)... continue!

Ummm..

He could have sent for a Dr.
He needed to sterilize the knife (candle flame or alcohol)
He should have sterilized the wound with alcohol.
He could have used bed sheets from his linen closet to pack the wound? Maybe some herbs?

Keep going!
- JB

Oh do spin it into 50 chapters! I LOVE this, and it's even well-written!
Bravo!

- JB

LOVE THIS ENDING! I watched the stage show last night and it was breath taking! you write soo well, its sweet and romantic but its subtle. great story :)

PLEASE UPDATE! I love this story! Don't think that you are having a hard time with writing LND Erik, because you are doing a wonderful job!

Please continue this it's really great! :D

I think you do beautifully. Please continue. At least write a fluffy night of bliss scene? LOL

update pleeeeeeeaaaaasee :)

Thanks for the update. Hope you will continue this story! I will read your other fics and I will review them I promise.

Sweet chapter, I love the back stories you make :). Please update soon.

Well, that was just delightful! I'm a sucker for some good EC fluff. Great chapter!

Eep! Write more, please? (:

Nice! I love the stories where she lives, but I find a lot of them get kinda repetitive. I thiink this one will be pretty unique though. Please udpate soon, and if you have the time, could you reard my story? Thanks!

TheAustralianZombie

Please update soon! This story is very interesting and I love it.