lucas! and whatever shipping that is that i forgot it's name! ewwwww...

Dear Kathy,
This is the second or third story of you
That isnt finished, you are killiiiing all your
Fans that love your great pearlshipping
S torys like me!
Pleaaaase hurry and update them to
Bring some happy ends and smiley faces
With tears in the eyes of your readers!
Thank youuu :)

AHHHH LUCAS STAY AWAY FROM DAWN GRRRRR XD Anyways, hope the next chapter comes soon! I'm sooo excited for your next chapters in your other stories too (;

Yay, I hope you post your updates soon, for your other not finished Dawn/Ash stories :)

Luuuuuuurrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrv eeee it... Update?

"cause i was in it" lol

please continue this and teardrops on my guitar i love these stories a lot

Holy Arceus your back _ I know this chapter came out a while but I finally got the chance to read it :D it was as beast as an angry Ursurang ( I think that's how you spell it :p ) keep up the good work can't wait to read more :D gtg Pokemon is on where I am _

AWESOME!

PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE IM PLEAING! Continue on updating sooner on this story! It totally rocks in being interesting amd ive been waiting forever to read tge updated on this story! T—T expect more reviews!

Hey when r u goin to update teardrops
on my guitar ive been waiting for months! T_T

That was such a great chapter! I feel so bad for Dawn and her messed up feelings for Ash :'( bit hopefully things will get better. Maybe Ash can help with those feelings! Anyway I'm loving the story so far, please update soon!

Hopefully, Ash can help Dawn put herself back together.

I know it's been like 7 months, but you should update this.

This us a great story with long chapters and would love it if you update!

Matt :D