|Reviews for The Never Ending Road|
| Guest 7/12/12 . chapter 34
Why didn't you have Becky telling dave about her powers.
| kenobigirlliz 3/12/12 . chapter 34
No, this sounds like a very interesting an awesome sequel! :) I'm ready!
| emenemdj 1/23/12 . chapter 33
I found this story only yesterday and have just finished it! Bravo! A wonderful reimagining! I am very much looking forward to a sequel. One request? Please don't make Dave revert to being naive and incapable of doing much without Balthazar and Veronica. Almost every fanfiction I have read that takes place following the movie has Dave turn back into an idiot/clutz/weakling etc. He has just defeated Morgana. Something no other sorcerer, including Balthazar and Veronica, could do. Give him that credit! Yes, he has a lot to learn, but you can't go back to being naive and lacking self confidence after that kind of accomplishment! And for goodness sake, don't let him turn into a egotistical jerk either! It's just not in him to be that. He's too kind of a person. After reading this story, I have faith you can write a wonderful sequel. Take it and run with it FantasyBard! :D
| 1Chartreuse1 1/8/12 . chapter 33
The whole story was fantastic, a very creative reimagining of the movie. I'm excited to read the sequel!
| GoForTehGig 1/8/12 . chapter 1
Really nice prologue. I have watched that movie way too many times and I could replay it through my mind while reading it. Nice replay and twist.
| lindsey and marie enterprises 1/7/12 . chapter 33
I've been following this story since I found it, but never had a chance to review. May I say excelled job! I felt that you kept everyone in character, and the thought of Veronica being with Balthazar physically instead of just in his thoughts is very nice.
Once again, I enjoyed it, an I will be looking foreward to the sequal!
| kenobigirlliz 1/7/12 . chapter 33
I liked your rendition of the movie, it added some nice new twists and turns and new characters. I look forward to the future :)
| kenobigirlliz 1/7/12 . chapter 32
Ah, so we have a converging story with Drake and Michael...interesting :)
| gabbygirl89 1/4/12 . chapter 31
Great chapter! I can't wait to see how this all ends!
| kenobigirlliz 1/4/12 . chapter 31
I like the fact that you aren't ending it here because I want to see what can come next.
| kenobigirlliz 1/2/12 . chapter 30
The glowing bracelet, now I wonder what the significance of that is...hmmm
| kenobigirlliz 12/30/11 . chapter 29
Hey this is a good chapter, but watch the spelling typos like Stutlar it's supposed to be Stutler
| gabbygirl89 12/27/11 . chapter 28
Great chapter! I can't wait for more!
| kenobigirlliz 12/26/11 . chapter 28
Well Drake being alive isn't so much a surprise, but Michael Harris...well I did see this sort of coming.
| kenobigirlliz 12/23/11 . chapter 27
You forgot an 'n' with one and in your chapter
Other than that this was a good chapter, and I think I know who is going to help them ;-)