Beautiful and heartbreaking.

Although you've requested constructive criticism, I can honestly say I've got nothing. Everything, from the title, context, plot, and even the general layout of your fanfic, was immaculate. Well done!

Now where did that box of tissues go?

*Blinks furiously*

Holy SHIT that was sad. Sad, sad, sad. AMAZINGLY written. WONDERFULLY paced. The characters were RIGHT ON. But dear GOD, that was SO. BLOODY. SAD.

Well done.

Sincerely,

Jester.

This is propably the saddest and still best story I have read in this section. Even though it's very short, for me, it is nearly perfect. You made me not just read the story, but feel it. And this, I think is a great achievement. Thank you and keep on writing! (Keep on drama as well, it'S really, really great!)

u should put a slash warning on this because i was expecting a gordon death with his greatest ally mourning him...not them being all lusty and such...couldnt read past the heated kisses part

Well... I'm not a fan of slash, especially between Bruce and Gordon (I mean : Gordon could be his father...) ; plus, I really like their friendship. But somewhere your story, the epilogue actually, just seems right. So, very good job. Thanks for this.