I love this story so much! It's perfect. Great grammar, spelling, discription, everything!

This is absolutely going in my fav stories.

Great job!

Aw, such a pity that this was a one shot. I was hoping to read more!

Well, either way, it was amazing. It gave me this warm feeling in my chest... And right now I think I'm starting to feel a little emotional! xD Only me...

It's very sweet, and you seem like an amazing author! Maybe if I find the time, I'll look into your other stories! :D

This one-shot really got deep in my heart

Wow, I haven't read your other story, but I can tell that you are an amazing writer. You kept me on the edge of my... well, I can't necessarily say "feet" because I'm sitting on my bed.

You kept me on the edge of my bed, begging for more. My fingers curled with anticipation.

Absolutely wonderful!

-Devious