|Reviews for I Love James Potter|
| HedwigBlack 2/15/12 . chapter 1
I love love love this! I love Marlene spiking her juice with Veritaserum. I love James's reaction. I love how everyone had made bets. It was funny and romantic and sweet. And aside from a few spelling errors it was really well written. Favoriting.
| Someone aka Me 12/8/11 . chapter 1
Overall, this is just plain adorable :D
"I have a feeling Marlene casted a silencing charm, but I can't be for sure." : I don't think "casted" is a word. It should be "cast."
"I mean seriously, when did he start doing homework? I guess hell did freeze over." : Ahahahaha. That made me laugh :D
"The entire hall is silent as they watch our exchange and it wasn't from a silencing charm. " : She wasn't sure whether or not Marlene had cast a silencing charm earlier, but now she's sure?
"They were noisy." : I think you meant, "They were nosy." Because they're silent.
Thing is, though, all of that's just nitpicky stuff. This is actually a really great piece. It's well written, and Marlene in particular is just fabulous, and the plot is simultaneously humorous and sweet.
Well done :D
| emmie333 11/24/11 . chapter 1
So so good. I love the bets!
| Girl-With-No-Name x 6/14/11 . chapter 1
:) It's Amazing! (:
| littlegirlgonemad 6/3/11 . chapter 1
this is awesome!
| Tani Smiles 3/26/11 . chapter 1
This was cute. It was an idea that's written about a lot, but I liked your use of veritaserum to make the truth come out. It was a light, enjoyable read and I really liked that. Thanks for writing this )
| Distant Lands 3/25/11 . chapter 1
This is so awesome! One thing; you should probably capitalize "love" in the title :).
| Loslote 3/25/11 . chapter 1
I loved this one! It's adorable. :)
| Annabella Prinx 3/25/11 . chapter 1
BRILLIANT! I can't say anything else but BRILLIANT!