Reviews for Ten Seconds Later
Guest 5/7/13 . chapter 1
This is my favorite fanfiction story. When are you going to post more?
kira215 5/3/13 . chapter 32
Well u had a good thing going until u made ur main character into a wimp... she bout killed rose because of a minor threat yet when really she should have mopped the floor with victoria and char easily all she had to do was set them a blaze and neither vampire knew she could do that and char doesnt seem to know anything bout how one is killed... any ways good luck but i think u might want to revise a bit
kira215 5/2/13 . chapter 24
Interesting story but i must say u really should toughen ur main mermaid up a bit
emma.gilbert.3551 4/22/13 . chapter 42
please make more i love this seaires
emma.gilbert.3551 4/21/13 . chapter 21
CHARLOTTE!
Guest 4/15/13 . chapter 42
Love this story can't wait for sequel!please update soon :) :)
enchantedforest33 4/2/13 . chapter 42
Wow amazing story, very well detailed and enjoyable. Thank you for writing this it was a lot of fun to read, but I'm so confused, THE END, FOR NOW? Does that mean its done, or that it will be continued, or that there will be a sequel, ugh this is gonna drive me nuts! Oh well, please write more, I think a sequel would be really great!
ObsessedwReading 4/1/13 . chapter 42
AW! YEA! Jacob came to live in Austrailia with Ariana! :D
Coraline 3/31/13 . chapter 42
Omg I can't believe it's over! I have loved this story from the begging it inspired me to write my own h2o crossover with twilight! You are a talented writer ! Please post a sequel soon!
chinaluv 3/31/13 . chapter 42
Omg that is the best ending ever! I want a sequel!
megan 3/31/13 . chapter 42
Wow dramatic cant wait for sequl
MangaGrl2665 3/31/13 . chapter 42
Okay so my idea of a perfect scenario is an epilogue of the other girls reactions to Jacob and his hotness. Or you could put that in the sequel. I'm not picky. I just really want a scene where all the girls basically drool all over Jacob and the guys get jealous until Jacob reminds them that he won't ever leave Arianna cause she is his reason for living.
manyfandomsgirl 3/31/13 . chapter 42
The ending was awesome! But please do a sequel!
xXJustaWriterxX 3/31/13 . chapter 42
Awwwww such a sweet ending! But if I were Ariana's mom I would proobably question the seriousness of their relationship, leave it to me to speculate but h edid move to the opposite side of the world for her! I love the emding, and really hope you do a sequel!
RougeReaper 3/31/13 . chapter 42
Loved it :)
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