| Reviews for Ten Seconds Later |
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Guest 5/7/13 . chapter 1 This is my favorite fanfiction story. When are you going to post more? |
kira215 5/3/13 . chapter 32Well u had a good thing going until u made ur main character into a wimp... she bout killed rose because of a minor threat yet when really she should have mopped the floor with victoria and char easily all she had to do was set them a blaze and neither vampire knew she could do that and char doesnt seem to know anything bout how one is killed... any ways good luck but i think u might want to revise a bit |
kira215 5/2/13 . chapter 24Interesting story but i must say u really should toughen ur main mermaid up a bit |
emma.gilbert.3551 4/22/13 . chapter 42please make more i love this seaires |
emma.gilbert.3551 4/21/13 . chapter 21CHARLOTTE! |
Guest 4/15/13 . chapter 42 Love this story can't wait for sequel!please update soon :) :) |
enchantedforest33 4/2/13 . chapter 42Wow amazing story, very well detailed and enjoyable. Thank you for writing this it was a lot of fun to read, but I'm so confused, THE END, FOR NOW? Does that mean its done, or that it will be continued, or that there will be a sequel, ugh this is gonna drive me nuts! Oh well, please write more, I think a sequel would be really great! |
ObsessedwReading 4/1/13 . chapter 42AW! YEA! Jacob came to live in Austrailia with Ariana! :D |
Coraline 3/31/13 . chapter 42 Omg I can't believe it's over! I have loved this story from the begging it inspired me to write my own h2o crossover with twilight! You are a talented writer ! Please post a sequel soon! |
chinaluv 3/31/13 . chapter 42Omg that is the best ending ever! I want a sequel! |
megan 3/31/13 . chapter 42 Wow dramatic cant wait for sequl |
MangaGrl2665 3/31/13 . chapter 42Okay so my idea of a perfect scenario is an epilogue of the other girls reactions to Jacob and his hotness. Or you could put that in the sequel. I'm not picky. I just really want a scene where all the girls basically drool all over Jacob and the guys get jealous until Jacob reminds them that he won't ever leave Arianna cause she is his reason for living. |
manyfandomsgirl 3/31/13 . chapter 42The ending was awesome! But please do a sequel! |
xXJustaWriterxX 3/31/13 . chapter 42Awwwww such a sweet ending! But if I were Ariana's mom I would proobably question the seriousness of their relationship, leave it to me to speculate but h edid move to the opposite side of the world for her! I love the emding, and really hope you do a sequel! |
RougeReaper 3/31/13 . chapter 42Loved it :) |