| Reviews for Inside the Konoha Library |
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Spiral Reflection 9/1/12 . chapter 5Really interesting one-shots, especially the last one. |
RenKiryu 8/19/12 . chapter 3That has to be the best concept I've ever read. Oh my god. I feel like such a bad person for loving this so much but I can't stop laughing. Oh my god. Tears of laughter. Oh my god. |
shademaster 8/19/12 . chapter 5Been a fan of yor Work for a long time awosome stories spymaster was best keep it up |
3466-0402 7/28/12 . chapter 3This was a really heartbreaking chapter... Sasuke's reaction to having killed Kakashi was terrifying. Well done! |
chrnno 7/21/12 . chapter 5Wow, just finished reading these one-shots and every single one of them left me very curious. You managed to pass the fundamentals of a story with all the differences it would have made and still not tell anything about the future. |
Freefan1412 7/6/12 . chapter 1You write very good naruto stories. You manage not to loose the original character in your writing and at the same time add a seriousness and edge to it that conveys a realistic view of ninja live and danger in a way that keeps a high level of suspense through your stories. You are doing a very good and i'm looking forward to more. :) |
BukkakeNoJutsu 6/11/12 . chapter 5That was cool, like Hetalia but not dumb. Hahaha |
Yoholic 6/11/12 . chapter 5a confusing oneshot but excellent nonetheless |
AiSard 6/10/12 . chapter 5oooo now this one is interesting p looks like a hard one to carry out but really wished this one became its own fic, seems really interesting to explore the whole idea of Naruto being a village spirit D (sounds so much less sillier than Naruto being Konoha tbh p ) |
Unknown Variable 6/10/12 . chapter 5This is cool. But I like Hetalia... |
Confer 3/22/12 . chapter 4Pretty cool. |
evilballoon 2/4/12 . chapter 4 Wow, this newest chapter... loved it! You could see the transition from canon Naruto to a mature outlook, and the chapter itself definitely a more gritty and realistic take on the Narutoverse please continue! |
lokobookworm95 1/29/12 . chapter 4Dude! All of these stories are awesome! You should continue all of them! My favorites were the Zabuza one and the Spymaster one! You're doing a great job, and I hope you post more of these ficlets soon! |
BukkakeNoJutsu 12/22/11 . chapter 4that first bit about the broteam verges on greatness. |
AiSard 12/16/11 . chapter 4you need to write a proper fic. ARGH. this level of awesomeness should not be contained to plot bunny repositories T-T Reread all four stories (been so long, forgot this was a plotbunny repository) and fell in love with all of them all over again. The latest could do with some polishing, and a proper end. but then, oneshot, all of them could p well, hopefully you get back in to writing these and maybe churn out 2-shots and 3-shots? bah, what do I care, just post stuff p its all good. As for writing technique, I think that style you like to use, little headings and whatnot, could be improved a bit. actually, the latest chapter is ok-ish really, but the ones before it was more obvious, the scene transitions sometimes happening too fast and not making enough sense fast enough. Actually, the latest chapter got it down ok really. And I really liked how you played with the conversations between Jiraiya and Naruto, with Naruto replying without the speechmarks? i think that was it, but yea, cool writing technique p as for the oneshot itself, I just wish there was more to it p really awesome, but its the bare bones of the idea, and I just can't help but be aware of all the events that aren't shown here, but I suppose instead of a fuller oneshot we got one where it carried on further, to the 'middle' of a story i guess? which just leaves the end p but mehhhhh oneshots. seriously, write a multi-chpt ficccccc O.O please? |