 DianaRose556 12/18/11 . chapter 25What happened to Legolas's bow! That was his trademark! |
 cje24576 11/6/11 . chapter 38Oh come on! Please say you haven't given up on this! This is so good! I want to see what happens. There better be a happy ending for all (meaning no deaths (except for the bad guys obviously)). Please update soon. Don't leave it hanging like this. |
 cje24576 11/6/11 . chapter 11Yay, they're married! This was beautiful. However, maybe you could write a more detailed version of the wedding night (maybe some sort of interlude for this chapter?)? Pretty please? |
 wolves2152 8/19/11 . chapter 38I'm hooked on this story please update it soon! |
 morganashadow 7/2/11 . chapter 4Did you mean 600 years or 6 centuries? Because 600 centuries is 60,000 years. |
 anon 4/1/11 . chapter 38 NO! It CANNOT end here! You MUST update NOW! Great story by the way! Loving the love between Leggy and Aragorn and Haldir and Glorfy! But seriously... UPDATE! |
 peni 3/22/11 . chapter 4 The elves in this story seem to have a mortal temper. Their emotions swing wildly from one sentence to the next...This story feels kind of bipolar. |
 Fires 3/22/11 . chapter 2 I like your story so far, but something is bothering me. Aragorn would have known instantly that he had shot at person the instant an arrow came back. He would have also concluded that Legolas was the person he shot at when Legolas revealed himself, a few seconds later. |
 Aeltari Kareidis 12/17/10 . chapter 38You probably don't even read these anymore but I just found this story. I have read it all. At first I admit I wanted to run away screaming...but there is something in your style that kept me lingering word after word.
Now I have reached the end and want more. Have you abandoned this story? I wish to know what Legolas' children are going to be like.
I could NOT wrap my head around a pregnant male elf but knowing as I do how magical they are anything is possible. I do have to ask however seeing as males DO lack the proper equipment for birth how were you proposing this to occur?
The love, the tenderness you show between the men is wonderful. I was also captivated by beautiful Glorfindel and Haldir's interactions. Those two are intensely sexual in nature and I loved it.
I love alternate universes. As a fanfiction writer myself I bend and break rules all the time. I am working on a LOTR story now which follows my online game character. Your story has inspired me.
Please finish this, if you can. |
 been-CARLISLED 8/16/09 . chapter 38 you have far more than 10 reviews yet you havent updated in a year are you gone crazy or something so hopefully you come to your senses in time and update this brilliant story! |
 timme 3/8/09 . chapter 7 who gives conditions like that. "if you're mean to me, i'll leave?" geez, isn't he supposed to love him? suck it up, people hurt each other, you forgive. and ANYTHING is better than marrying maron. |
 tamingriki 7/27/08 . chapter 38 Just when it was getting good. Hope Rissan was given redemption. Meron, however, needs to be stopped for GOOD. Evil should never be allowed to continue.
Hurry up with the next chapter! |
 SasunaruTLA 2/5/08 . chapter 38Where's the epilogue! AH! NO! you can't stop it there! NO! Twin BOYS! NO! DON"T LET IT BE OVER! NOO! |
 SasunaruTLA 2/4/08 . chapter 33I'm glad he's havig twins! I'M a twin! YAY! I LOVE this story! |
 SasunaruTLA 2/4/08 . chapter 25AWESOME! I can't wait to finish it! I LOVE twins! Sequals are always nice! |