ohhhh i liked this one alot,,,, the foreplay on the train too funny... i knew some how they would meet up again. Lafayette was too funny with the sexual innuendo... but with Eric having that much interest in her that quickly was cool. Bill is still a douche... thank you for the story my best Kristie

Mmm sweet and hot, I'd love to see more of these two. I like your stye of writing.

Okay, I have decided you can't write anymore one shots. You must turn them all into long long stories. Because each time I get to the end of one I am like nooooooooo! So good. Love love love human Eric!

yikes girl this is hot! haven't had a chance to catch up on your fic in a while! love you!

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oh i loved it! great one shot!

Thank you so much for writing us a story and taking us home with you! Your contribution added so much to our contest and our library of hometown fics that we adore.

Oh, I can imagine why Sookie would want him forever.

If train-rides are this exciting and interesting in Philadelphia, I might just take a trip over :-D.

Thank you for inviting us home with you!

What a fun ride that was, vikinglover elle! Loved the sexy meeting on the train and then the sweet building of a real relationship. And of course, the naughty train ride. You did a great job of taking us home with you. Thank you so much for sharing this story and telling it through our favorite couple. Great job!

Oh, falling in love on a train! Once on the subway in Toronto, a really cute (perfect boyfriend cute) guy and I flirted with each other in the reflection of the window as we stood side-by-side. When he got off at his stop, he ran beside the subway smiling at me, and threw his arms up into the air in defeat as the train disappeared into the tunnel. SO romantic! Anyways, I guess this one brought me back to my own special commuter moment.

I loved this fic! Sookie and Eric were screaming hot. I'll read this one again!

*sigh* damn I love Eric

This was such a sweet little story! LOVED IT!

Lovely story. Hope you want to continue it at some point.

I loved the story, but since you rated it M it would have been cool if you had gone into a bit more detail while they were on the train(they were the only ones in that car) and that they had gone further.

Very amusing train ride. I love, "pompous pistachio eating ass". LOL Also "So what exactly does rum tum tummy mean? It sounds delicious." Ha ha Fun story.

Excellent Romance/Humor story. Loved the train ride into the city... ROFLMAO. The lunch made me think of the "I'll have what she's having " scene in the movie "When Harry met Sally".

Great AH Eric and Sookie story, well written, and absolutely hilarious... and very sweet.