nice i like it!

Wow. i truly like your story..

it's so great.. i am fans of ccs and now after read your story I'am getting more and more love it...!

How many times do I have to say that I love your works - and you, of course - before you're satisfied? *semi-glares*

Just kidding. Really. I want more! XD

One thing though... I don't quite understand. Is this when Yue and Kero-chan when they were FIRST created, or when Clow was ready to leave? While your story summary declares quite clearly it's the former, somehow... It seems ALMOST like it's the latter.

Having said this much (and read three of your works in a day), I'd like to say that you have a flair for poetry. The rhythm of your words is beautiful. )

Beautiful, absolutely beautiful.

that's a good concept you thought of. i especially liked that little part with kero and yue, i've always wondered if they ever saw each other, or kero wondered, as siblings, not just guardians.

Great story!

Oh wow, this was such a great fiction! Is this really a spoiler to the whole manga? Its so nice...yet sad..

'Hitori De' means [By Oneself]? I always thought it meant Firebird...hmm..oh well. This was very well written, and definitely wonderful. _ I enjoy your fictions! Please continue to write soon!

Suppi! *Whines* That was really sad

Wow. So sad! *Wails* But a really nice story anyway. It's an interesting take, and I love the last lines. Please write the Clow fic, I' can't wait to see your take on everything!

that is sooooo good! i might cry, but still it's soo good! please write more!

I never thought about it from Clow's POV. I guess it would be very lonely for him. Great story! Please write another.

Awwwww. *sniff*

I don't know why I never reviewed this before, it's truly lovely and I really like it. I'm slow and lazy, I guess. . I love all you CCS stuff.

Awww...that's nice...sad but nice.

*sniff* Never have I read a story about Clow that was so real, and he was crying, and his poor mother, and Yue and Kero and, and, and, and- *bawls* IT WAS JUST SO GOOD! Keep up *sob* the great *sob* writing, and I'll make sure to keep reviewing. I'm sure I just got something in this darned eye of mine...

This is very good.

this is soo kool!

write more!