 Sango Tsubasa 10/14/11 . chapter 1Not gonna lie, that gave me chills. I love the idea that Yusei talks to a Bruno who isn't there ;.; I just loved it. |
 Iliaster 9/29/11 . chapter 1 Within the first few lines I understood that it wasn't real. The dusty keyboard sealed it for me. I like it.
It does come across as a little too wish filling, in that Bruno gives the answer that Yusei wants to hear... It feels good... but at the same time a little contrived and convenient in the way the loose ends are tied.
Bruno is dead...but this Bruno was borne from Yusei's sadness... and inherently, his answers align with what Yusei had always hoped. |
 Set Your Heart Free 4/20/11 . chapter 1This is really well written. Really sad as you finally piece together what's happening :(
The bit about six not feeling complete... referring to the team? |
 SkyeDescent 4/2/11 . chapter 1Awesome:) |
 Lildragonbabe 3/28/11 . chapter 1This is a wonderful story. It touched my heart, and the end gave me goosebumps. You really did a good job analyzing Yusei's feelings towards Bruno's end. This is a wonderful story, and I look forward to seeing more work like this from you. |