 smalsa 3/17/12 . chapter 1That was brilliant really had me believeing everything ending had me laughing my head off your an awesome writer! |
 anon 2/29/12 . chapter 1 okay you pulled the worst crap on me ...WHAT THE HELL ARE YOU SAYING APRIL FOOLSSSSSSSS! wrote this on my 3ds lol |
 anon 2/6/12 . chapter 1 im sorry but this made me choke on blood sory for being so harsh wrote this on my 3ds |
 Amythyst 7/27/11 . chapter 1 Your a sick genius. I applaude that. May I learn from your absolutely amazing story. |
 carla 6/5/11 . chapter 1 Relly! LOL loved it. but thanking wtf... i 3 trunks! not totally funny but hey... |
 futureauthor13 6/1/11 . chapter 1The ending was so hilarious, and I can definitely see Trunks doing this. Lol, great job :) |
 This Author Left FanFiction 5/31/11 . chapter 1Damn does Trunks have a cruel sense of humor...probably got it from his father. XD Probably could have been shorter, but the end effect wouldn't have been as awesome. Nice job. |
 gay dbz guy 5/16/11 . chapter 1 lol |
 forgethehorror 5/15/11 . chapter 1Hahaha this was good! I actually believed it! |
 hieimasteroflight 5/7/11 . chapter 1Intense description there I actually thought Trunks was going to do it. |
 djtt 4/30/11 . chapter 1 you had me going good. i think i may have shed a tear or sixty. but it was worth laughing my ass off in the end |
 hellfiresaiyan 4/22/11 . chapter 1Nice. You got me. I would've lmao if Bulma had accidentally read the note. :) |
 SA2208 4/1/11 . chapter 1Totally awesome! And what makes it more? My dad and brother were sitting next to me talking about the heart attacks and SUICIDE due to the WC 2011 between India and Pakistan. LOL i laughed so hard when they said suicide...(though i agree it's a serious matte rnut a little stupid) |
 merlincrazy 3/31/11 . chapter 1hahahaha This is freaking hilarious! |
 Neko Hoshi Hime Okami 3/30/11 . chapter 1trunks dont die...you little jackass. i was worried to death like vegeta and pulled a prank. i admit it was good but i was worried to death. TT i really liked it minus being scared to death about trunks committing suicide. |