Thank you for writing this amazing story.

Well... I just wish that there had been some sort of CONSEQUENCES for Edward. They never discussed the fact that he and his family LEFT HER TO DIE.

Bella was tortured because of him and the Cullens, and it's just brushed over! Why?

Why can't they face what they did to Bella? Since when is 'feeling bad' enough for the damage they caused? How can she TRUST him or his family ever again? "Love is everything" sounds nice, but he hasn't proven himself.

You have a beautiful writing style. Good luck with your original fiction.

Thank you for writing and sharing this with all of us.

Congratulation. Great story i hope let's know about your new writing.

Congratulation and good luck in your new adventure.

Oh so sweet! Thank you for writing this story to support all of the charities, and for finishing it for all of us. I look forward to the day when I can buy an original fiction with your name on it 3

Loved this story so much!

Wow, this whole chapter has been purely romance. So much sweetness, tenderness, sensitivity. I love it! When Bella admitted she didn't have a base I wondered immediately if the reason is because a glass case would upset her. But anyhow, I just love these to coming back together! 3

I liked this version of their reunion. Good writing. Now I'm going to go and read more of your fics. Good luck in your writing of original fiction.

Another beautiful proposal. I loved the way you ended this story as well.

That was such a great story! Thank you so much for sharing your writing talent with us! Good luck on your original writings!

LindyP :)

lovely ending

glad they reached their true relationship together

thanks for sharing!

Great story. Thanks for writing.

Very sweet

What an incredible NM alternative!

Thanks so much for sharing xx

Thank you for a beautiful story. All the best for your writing career.

Awesome thanks. Good luck with your writing